Great story, good to see a well-written stein's gate fic! :)

Aww, this is so sweet and adorable. It's different from the movie but then again that's the whole point. What I don't get is how did the lab mems know about time travel? Did Kurisu tell them?

This is one of the best Steins Gate fic i have ever read.

I love Suzuha as a character in the actual anime! She has such a great personality and her realistic optimism is really well done. The first part of this chapter reminds me a lot of Steins;Gate Zero, except in this case Kurisu is the one who fails and Suzuha acts as the V-mail sent from Kurisu to her past self.

Also the tsundere's back :D. Nice job extending the plot; the movie ended really poorly. Kurisu didn't even kiss him back!

I think you're developing the relationship between Okabe and Kurisu pretty realistically. One thing: how do Daru and Mayurii know who Okabe is after he disappears. Shouldn't they forget immediately who Okabe is as they are not time-leaping?

Wow the ending is great. It parallels a lot with Okabe's experiences. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Aww the last scene was so cute. It's cool to see Kurisu admitting her feelings more openly, but that does take away from some of her tsundere appeal. Maybe's she has already changed to deredere :(

jk I prefer this Kurisu. Still, I find it unlikely that Kurisu develops feelings for Okabe as quickly as she does in the OVA. Maybe enough time has past between the OVA and this.

Anyways well done; the movie would have been received better if it was written like this.

I really like your take on this movie. Kurisu time-leaping a second time to confront Okabe and confess her emotions is not as true to her original character, but I think this is better, as it shows how remembering the 3 weeks from another worldine has changed her. The last scene was great, and finally a real confession! I think that you could have wrote the scene where Okabe disappears to be a little more dramatic for Kurisu, but I guess it is not as important of a plot point in this story, as she sees him again pretty soon.

Keep writing!

Damn this chapter was really well done. The dialogue really shows how much each of them cares for the other and highlights Okabe's pain. Good job!

Wow you wrote a lot in four days! Thanks for updating. Some comments:

Again, great job incorporating Kurisu's emotions and thought processes throughout this chapter. I think reading what is going on in her head is much more satisfying than seeing it happen. You did a really good job staying true to Kurisu's character; she cares about Okabe and shows this subtlety, but is still able to use her rational side to help him.

Keep writing!

Hi,

Just wante to let you know that I'm enjoying your story very much. I find the changes and additons you've made very interesting and great. Can't wait to read your next update.

Luf

Remember, Kurisu can only time leap to 48 hours before :D

CERN? It's SERN in the Steins;Gate universe

Well done! I really enjoyed the added dialogue and Kurisu's emotional perspective that you put in the story. Mayuri and Daru were also pretty well characterized. I liked how you set up the banter between Kurisu and Okabe.

Some comments: Okabe feels a little too tsundere; I don't think he acted as wishywashy in the movie, as it was mostly covered up by his mad scientist persona. Also how does Kurisu get drunk off of a few sips of beer? It would make more sense if she drank the whole can. Finally, it is El Psy Kongroo, not Congroo. See here:

/r/steinsgate/comments/33uqfm/el_psy_kongroo_or_el_psy_congroo/

Anyways, really nice job on this chapter! It followed the movie really nicely and the dialogue feels completely natural. Keep on writing!

Hi! I was visiting Steins;Gate fandom then I found this. So I quickly read it since it sounded interesting.

So you don't like the movie? I have to disagree about that, because I like that movie a lot. Fufufu :3

What I noticed instantly is that the characters don't call each others right. Okabe calls others right, Mayuri calls others right, but the others don't. Like Kurisu, who calls Mayuri with -chan in your story. I am really sensitive about inconsistensies, so it makes me slightly uncomfortable.

For the plot, you changed many things. No, no, I won't say that it's bad. From the 'Operation Jormungandr' it seems you want to increase the romance intensity. I am looking forward to the fluff you promised ;)

That's all. Thank you very much! I'll continue to read and review.

At the end, I have to say: please excuse my bad English. I hope you understand what I said.