| Reviews for White Sheep: Chamber of Secrets |
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Guest chapter 3 . 3/25/2019 I've read and reread Friendship, Love, Twists and Turns multiple times and loved it all the same and it's sequels. They are all just feel-good sort of fics that makes me wish that your retelling and interpretation was canon. I LOVE that all the Marauders are alive and living together. I love that Regulus is a loving uncle to Harry and Lyra - I've always been kinda bitter that Sirius died not knowing that his little brother was a hero in his own right. Your fics just feel like you're giving the characters what they deserve - Harry has a loving family, Remus gets to teach in his own way, Regulus is on good terms with his siblings, etc. I really like your works and how you write your vision into an enjoyable and readable story! Maia is also a likeable and well-rounded OC who feels like a proper character - with flaws and traits that make her HUMAN, which I find many writers can have difficulty writing so great work in breathing life to Maia! :) I'm also a writer so I understand the slump writers can get into in writing fics, so I won't urge or ask you to update. BUT I ask that you take care of yourself and not feel pressured to go back to this until you are ready to deliver - be it a month or a couple of years from now. I have written under the pressure to appease my readers before and it only drained me out and made me abandon works. I am perfectly fine with rereading what you have so far. I mean, you have two full-length fics that are written well! |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/31/2018 Please please please update it.. it's such a fantastic story.. can't wait to see what happens further in the series |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/14/2018 Really love your story. Such a unique retelling. Please update soon! |
jimark chapter 1 . 1/29/2018 I do hope you revive this series, it has a lot going for it, and I've enjoyed PS and the 3 chapters of CoS so far. I think you've got just the right chemistry between everyone in the story, and that is very rare. Whoever noticed that Molly might be wishing for friends of her own at home in the Burrow? Only fault I have is how much of the plot involves gratuitous kanoodling. It's cute though, I suppose. Please consider resuming, hoping for more. |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/23/2018 It's been a year since you last posted I really want to see how you write this story and the reactions to Harry being a parselmouth seeing how he is a pureblood also how come you didn't delve into the fact that maia and James are first cousins once removed seeing how James mother dorea was the younger sister to maia grandfather pollux it would be interesting to see some reactions to this close family relation |
TheHalflingRanger chapter 3 . 10/1/2017 Loving this series and looking forward to the next chapter! |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/28/2017 I miss this story when are you going to get back to posting new chapters |
Guest chapter 3 . 7/12/2017 Please update |
Smuzzie chapter 3 . 4/25/2017 Love this series, I also adore you're Doctor Who series, but may I make a suggestion? Maybe have the Weasley Twins overhear the Marauders calling each other by their nicknames and then they just start idolising the four? Maybe you've already got that planned for another chapter of story though. But seriously, loving it! |
nikkaishungry chapter 3 . 4/24/2017 Love the series! Hope you continue this series! Can't wait for Lyra to go to Hogwats. |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/22/2017 When are you going to continue this story I quite like it and I want to see what happens in the next book when Lyra goes to hogwarts I kind of hope that you might give harry another love interest than gunny maybe Daphne greengrass |
emily.barber.18 chapter 3 . 3/5/2017 Love you story. Cant wait to see more! |
ForeverTeamEdward13 chapter 3 . 1/30/2017 I'm in love with these stories! Please please update again soon! |
IWantColouredRain chapter 3 . 1/30/2017 very good update soon please |
Bookworm742 chapter 3 . 1/28/2017 I loved that chapter thank you so much for updating. I recently reread the other two books in this series and I had a feeling that Charlie's crush on Maia would be brought again soon. Please update |