First of all, Ash was going to pick Squirtle instead of of Charmander as his starter. Said so in episode AG 102. Other than that, this was a good one.

Misty is right about one thing. Love is the most important thing in the world. Iris doesn't seem to realize that love takes an individuals on the road to maturity.

Nice story.

brilliant!~~~~~~

Alexa is Sichuan a stupid women to think that just because Ash shows maturity one day,he will show it everyday. She just proves that she is the one who needs to grow up and that she is a kid. Poor Iris. Having to listen to Alexa BS. Great story. Have a nice day.

Hahaha to be honest , I'm also quite annoyed by Iris in the anime sometimes XD that's why my Ash pairing is with Bianca in Gen 5 :) thanks as always for another entertaining story :).

Genial k

Hehe, payback's a b***h, Iris. Payback's a b***h.

Man, Iris was such a spoiled brat in this story. Nice one, though. Flowed very nicely and hope to see more.

hahahahahahahaha I knew it iris is the little kid talk about bad luck for her and ash good luck for him but hey iris is cute right an ash getting bianca cute couple great story bro keep it up.

Yes I love this! Give me more!

Iris is so annoying :p

Ha Ha not too shabby try doing the same thing but with Clemont and Bonnie's situation!

Iris is like an overprotective mom because she cares about Ash.

this is a really good fanfic. this fanfic really proves that Iris is the one that needs to grow up, no mater how much she denies it. although she has a point on one thing, WHY did Zekrom show himself the day he arived in Unova. they never did reveal the reason why.

this just gave me an idea thanks to the title...an appropriately aged ash...(hed be what...18-20 after all his journeys?) coming across a young homeless Iris,and basically adopting face it,shes cute before she gets her bratty additude.