ahh it's so amazing only thing that is missing is people gaining eyes on the inside after seeing a great one

love it

Well I find no need to flame this, its a good story if a little short.

Hey, its 2020 and where wanting more. Is there a chance this will come back, because this shit be GOOOOOOD!

Espero que aun continúes la historia

Update this beast sucka.

I want to see the fall out

Well this was equal parts horrifying and amazing and I kinda want to see some followups... heh.

Correction, they wouldnt have lasted thirty minutes due to being used to killing blows actually killing, instead they would be shocked that the stab to the head or heart didnt kill before being sliced to pieces, though with magic they might have lasted a few days if they hid well enough

i love this story i really like idea you went this

This should be a full-fledged story.

Nice job.

Would be cool if this continued,
You can't realy create a phsical obsitcal if you do wan't to (as in fighting) becouse she is far to strong.
but you could continue the story in the way of Henrieta and others wanting to get her back and help her regain a somewhat normal life. But to do this in a way which is not unintentionally awkward and entertaining is quite hard.

Anyway thank you for the story.

huh. That was unique and well thought out. I naturally can't help thinking about where the future of this world would go but I respect and appreciate it being a oneshot. If anything, it being such helps capture the feelings within better. The finality and loss, also the sheer grit of Yharnam.

Hmmmm... I feel a bit sad for Louise in this, but all in all, very well written, great job.

Well. I must say, you did a remarkable job of capturing the cruel darkness of Yharnam. Well done. I thoroughly enjoyed this one-shot.