I really like this plot line! I hope that you finish this story, it’d be a shame too. At the same time, I get it when we have so much stuff to do. I really hope you update!

The story is great! I can't wait for the rest.

NOOO! You can’t just write a cliffhanger like that and then leave it for six months! Personally, I LOVE this story (but poor Peter!) and I can’t wait to see what happens when Cap realizes the boy he met at the hospital is actually Spider-Man. Also, (you don’t have to if you don’t want to), but it would be awesome to see Tony feel bad about hunting Peter and eventually become something of a father figure (cue fluff!) Anyway, just some suggestions, but keep writing and update again soon please!

Awesome! Great fic. I hope you update soon!

Please, please, please, please , pleeeaasssee update! This is so good! I NEED MOORRREE!

I thought it was great

To fanfiction jest naprawdę fajne. Akcja nie nudzi, intryga Lokiego bardzo ciekawi, a smutny, pełen poczucia winy, pusty Peter łamie serce... Czekam na kolejny rozdział!

Wait what? How long has Loki been Tony?

This story is so amazing! Can’t wait for your next update! I love how you get Peter and Captain America to meet up before Captain America knew he was Spiderman! Can’t wait to see what happens when Peter goes to talk to Captain America! Please update when you can!

I love this! But the cliffhanger is so annoying, I want to know what happened! good job

nice

It says you updated 7hours ago, I don't know your updating schedule, but I would love top see another chapter soon. Amazing story btw!

Can you please repost the chapter. A common glitch occurred in your chapter. The font commands are shown.

this chapter is formatted weird

So, thanks for posting again! You might want to repost this chapter. It translated all wonky. Can't wait to read it!