thank you ;)
what happened to teddy?
will she get him back?
more please

Lily perhaps looks like her mother and James is more similar to him because of his curly dark hair ?

Potter's meeting with Shamal comes off as being very forced. First she is standing there watching the fire, but isn't wearing her Cloak. Assuming that she would immediately move to return to Britain once she had Teddy it is still a bit off that she would just be standing around waiting to be found.

The only thing I can think is that she is waiting to see if anyone escapes, but that would imply she was intending of acting while holding Teddy. If that is the case, then why wouldn't she be under the Cloak? If she isn't planning on taking any action, then why not leave? If all that she wants is to see who survives, then why not call Kreacher and have him do it? If calling Kreacher is impossible, then set up the mirror and ask one of her friends keep an eye out.

Then she has the worlds more convenient flashback. First, despite flashing back to a time when she was fighting she takes no hostile action. Second, despite being so lost in the flashback that she mistakes Shamal for Sirius so still remembers that she is holding Teddy. Then when she comes out of the flashback to discover that Shamal has stolen Teddy from her she doesn't have a huge reaction.

You have her using an Unforgivable against the Estraneos, but almost seems to be bantering with Shamal. The shifts in tone in that scene is bordering on schizophrenic. As a reader is comes across as the writer wanting to bring these characters together and bending the narrative to make it work.

I feel that I'm being very critical, but I want to make it clear that I like this story and I think at its core there is something awesome.

Thank you again for sharing your story. I appreciate the hard work and effort that you have put into this.

You've presented the idea of Potter being rather competent, but multiple times now you've shown that this isn't the case. I don't know if your intent is to have Potter come off as a bit arrogant and self-aggrandizing, but when it comes to her martial ability that is how it reads. I'm a big fan of unreliable narrators so I like the idea of post-Voldemort Harry being full of herself and blundering around, but a bunch of other details seems placed to contradict that impression.

Regardless, I'd either go whole hog with the unreliable narrator, or take some time to show the competence that Potter gained. The mix doesn't really serve the narrative and it just makes Potter's character come across strangely.

Thank you for taking the time to share your story. I appreciate the time and effort you have put into it.

It's very interesting and good a bit confusing cuz of the hopping but still good. Though plot hole you put Sinclair from her mothers side in an earlier chapter then changed it to James Sinclair here~

I love this. I’ve been reading since the first chapter but I’ve always been more of a ghost reader than anything else. I love how you have developed this, and upon realizing you didn’t like how it was going went back and changed it. I wonder, with Reborn meeting her in the future, if it will do what it did with the Simon family and change events. Perhaps he will seek her out sooner, who knows? I’m kind of wondering what Hermione and Ron are doing right now and how Sirius hasn’t been cleared. I kind of figured that would be among the first things Harriet would’ve seen to, even above clearing her own name. I cannot wait to see where this goes and I hope for more Tsuna and Reborn interacting with Iris, and since I’m pretty sure Tsuna was the one eavesdropping he might discuss what he heard with Reborn. Again who knows. Overall this story is one of the most thought out, yet still true to the source material and not evenly long winded, pieces I have had the honor to read. I will be eagerly waiting for the next update.

nice! cant wait for the next chapter. did you have a pairing for her set up?

Can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz

yup, I denfinitely like the new chapter as well. Thank you for updating! (and replying to my previous review)

How have I not reviewed this yet? My bad.

Great chapter. I really love seeing the wizarding world and how it reacts to Harriet. I'm really looking forward to the trial. Will Shamal attend the trial? That would be one hell of an introduction to the wizarding world.

So the future arc continues. For a while it seems. Sigh... But I do love the interactions between Iris and Xanxus. Best part of the chapter is them just bitching at each other until Dino leaves lol.

My question is... there's no way they aren't going to notice their fenced in. Eventually someone will notice the whole 'no one in or out' thing, right?

thanks for the update! interesting to see Kawahira be brought in...interesting times ahead for sure.

appreciate all your hard work!

I love this story

Amazing chapter and have a happy holidays!~

Awesome chapter ️

I can’t wait for Reborn to learn more! Everything is so interesting! I can’t wait to read more!