Reviews for The Marks We Carry |
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![]() ![]() ![]() my thoughts you a tease to fangirls and guys everywair for that ending. haha |
![]() ![]() Any spoilers for past early season 3? |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update your story. I love it so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Somehow didn't notice me that you uploaded another chapter. So I'm sorry for the delay. Great chapter, although I'm a bit sad that almost every good story nowadays turns out to be slash or pre-slash. What happened to good old friendship stories? But I know you warned me aabout it and so I won't complain. I love the "Hexenwerk". Very nice idea. But you mark the Story as "complete"? Can't be. I'm pretty sure it was 10 chapters over at AO3 :-) And ending a story on a cliffhanger wouldn't be very nice to your Readers, lol. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Eventually I managed to catch up with your story. I really like the way you think (and write). I love how you put Nick through the winger and I'm curious to see where you'll take his relationship with Renard. It's a pity that there are so few reviews, as it's a great story. Please don't be discouraged, I'm very sure a lot of people enjoy it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Och! That as to hurt! A lot. Great chapters again.:) I love Nick whump and theres a lot here. But not only this. Monroe and Renard working together and both in protective mode. Its cute in a way. So I hope Nick will heal up alright and it will be fun to see how he will react to Renard being so... lets call it protective ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are awesome! Don't feel like you have to rush, though! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi I just read your Story. And I find it really Good. In my opinien the Actionsences are Always the hardest And yours is exciting and well wroten. Thumps up :D So I hope I can read your next Charter soon. I Need to know what is Happening to good Old Nick! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Inzwischen war ich auf deinem Profil und habe festgestellt, dass ich auch in Deutsch schreiben kann. Prima. Auch das dritte Kapitel hat mir sehr gut gefallen, obwohl es manchmal etwas unklar ist, wer spricht, weil du ab und zu auch dann eine neue Zeile anfängst, wenn die Perspektive nicht wechselt. Aber das sind Kleinigkeiten. Mir gefällt das Verhältnis zwischen Renard und Nick, wie du es schilderst. Ich habe immer gedacht, die zwei könnten gute Freunde werden, weshalb mir der momentane Verlauf der Serie, wo sich Renard der anderen Seite zuwendet, so gar nicht gefällt. What can possibly go wrong from here? Ich hoffe, noch eine ganze Menge. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. I enjoyed the fight and the precipice was an unexpected turn. One thing though: ... heavy booted food shooting out in a kick at the wesen's kneecap." Meat or vegetables? Never mind, it's a hilarious image you created with this little typo. :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very good start. I like the title. And I love stories from former seasons. I was a bit irritated at first because you write in present tense which is unusual. But now I've gotten used to it. The relationship between Nick and Renard is very well described, I could literally see them acting. Great Job, I hope you'll finish the story. |
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