please I'm so confused I need more information. so please continue this story

In Soviet Russia * reads title*

More!

Done with ch 24, dude you need to finish this story bro! It’s freaking awesome!

Vore?! Really?!
Dude I get it’s a story, a fantastic and awesome one at that, it a little warning or at least a mid chapter warning would be nice.
Good story, fantastic plot, and best organization I have ever seen in any story I have ever read, cannot wait to read the rest; but I hope there is a warning for things like that cause I can go on in my life without imagining that anymore.
Just hope they’ve got a knife on ‘em to guy the sicko...

Please continue this. I just found this last month and I've been trying to read it slow but i couldn't help but finish it. The way you write makes your readers want to know what happens next. I took inspiration from your timeline skipping in my story I'm writing. I love it can't wait to read more.

All of this info on Old Zoop must have been just as overwhelming to Judy as it was to us poor readers. I'm not entirely convinced that they're being truthful about what happened because that sure doesn't sound like Judy. Then again, desperate times call for desperate measures, I suppose. And things are getting pretty desperate once again.

Loved the reveal on how Nick and Carla went too farla. It's so mundane how it happened and yet it makes so much sense that it was so impulsive for them. Now I can't help but picture them as a happy couple and it's...strange. xD

And as things get more concerning in Old Zoop, the mysteries continue to pile on. Looking forward to getting some answers. Eventually.

Poor Gloria. That whole scene was really sweet and touching and then that last sentence happened. Makes me want to see James go down even more for letting his wonderful wife down like that. Good to know that at least she's a WildeHopps shipper. :P

But the main event was, of course, the big scene at the bloodbat-I mean, bank. Even though we all knew what was going to happen, actually seeing it play out was intense and gripping, with some great action choreography as well. Death by hospital bed is certainly one of the more ironic ways to go. An anagram name aside, I can't say I really saw that reveal coming. Neither did Judy clearly. Looking forward to seeing where that little revelation takes her.

Yes! You have returned and when I received a notification of a new chapter a bit of my fanboy came out. I cannot begin to explain how amazing I think this story is. You are by far one of my favorite authors here, and this dark spin on zootopia is phenomenal. I had to start over to avoid any confusion, and already I find myself on chapter 23. I am pretty confident when I say I'm not the only one who throughly enjoys this story. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see how all the puzzle pieces come together, and how this epic story will conclude!

Wait what 0.0! Mai I mean Ami is Judy's daughter? But wasn't Ami her niece? And wasn't she five years old when the bat attacked her that's means Judy had her at a young age oh no my kind getting confused . does Nala know my her is her sister? And Carls lost a baby so sad :( is that why her and Nick broke up?

I can't wait till you update again I want to know more :D

I'm so stumped I can only review this chapter with one word. WOW.

I love this story wish it was updated more xx

OK after reading this chapter I gave my self the entire night to think about it... And I just cant even begin to figure out where in the timeline Judy could have had another pregnancy. Because there is a large age difference between Ami and Nala So they are definitely not from the same batch. And if Ami is Judy's daughter then why was she with Judy's parents and not with Judy? Why did she call Judy … Judy and not Mom? Things aren't adding up here. Is Ami lying to see if Judy really remembers her like... "Hi Mom!" And Judy is supposed to be like "No not Mom." Then Ami would be like "WOW SHE ACTUALLY DOES REMEMBER!" Or Is there a time line in the story that she hasn't recalled yet? Maybe when she went savage and ate Bellwhether… Jack was following her "as was his MO", seeing her in need of help he tried to save her but in her "savage state" seeing a male bunny made her bunny instincts kick in and she jumped him (sexually)? It has to be something similar... Because other than Judy's family, Jack is the only other rabbit mentioned in this story. There could be adoption... Maybe Judy adopted Ami long before all this mess started? Jeeez this it way too broken... I need more puzzle pieces

It's a trap! Heh. Couldn't help but imagine that line the whole time during that last scene. It was paced well with some good visual descriptions, as was the whole chapter, and I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next, especially after that cliffhanger!

Hallelujah! Another chapter has been added! No longer can I refer to this story as Death Becomes Fic!

*ahem* That aside, I’m impressed by how you finally managed to sort out this truly massive amount of new characters. I can easily pick out the major players and make some guesses about how they’ll come to influence future events, but there’s still plenty of mystery here regarding how predator-run Zootopia eventually became prey-run Zootopia. I don’t quite buy the idea that Judy was that ruthless to ally with the bats, at least not yet.

Speaking of Judy, that middle section was by far the most interesting and mindfuckery scene in a while. I almost suspected that this was a completely alternate universe for a bit, but it seems more likely that this somehow relates to Judy’s memory loss and that Nick is deliberately hiding it from her. Why that is I can’t fathom just yet, but it must be pretty serious for Nick to keep this from her. Also picked up on the appearance of Jack Savage there, only adding to the intrigue.

Very good update. I’m happy to see that your long absence has not impacted your writing talent.