I don’t think you know how much 70,000 metric tonnes of gold is, my dude. It’s a bit technical for my tastes but I still think this story is decent. It just needs more proofreading.

With the exception of the incredibly overdone cliche of sounding like a crazy person and talking about past lives and such, it’s a decent story.

I hope you eventually come back to this as it looked like it could have been pretty good!

This is really good. Hope to see more.

is this over

can we see more of this?

please update soon this is awesome I want- no need- to see more of this be done.

everything is magnificent!

Reminds me alot of total war: warhammer
Great chapter yo!

I enjoyed this immensely!
When are you gonna make a marvel version of this?

bloody well love it keep up the good work.

It's really a great story.
The main character is a little over powered.
The choices he made in the first chapter were well thought out for Overlord
You write very well.
So really it will not control the minions?
I wonder also how people of the continent see the empire.
He will be able to use some improvement that the overlords had in the tower?
I tried searching but could not find what ROB means.
ps: google translator

Great story so far!

Can't say I dislike anything about the story. I can't wait to find out where this will go.

Quick question: is the title supposed to be "TRIALS of being an Overlord" not "Tirals of being an Overlord"? Besides the supposed typo, I'm looking forward to how this develops, especially since I enjoyed the Overlord game series.

On another note, I really like your other story of Riddick totally trolling the Empire. I laughed so hard. In fact, I'll make some reviews on that story in the near future. Peace out.