That didn't end like I expected D: I have no idea what will happen now! At least Gozaburo is gone...or IS he XD

Aaaaaaah this was so suspenseful! I wonder if the virus worked or not...I bet Gozaburo would try and possess Seto, or maybe Pegasus or even Mokuba D:

oh no! darn cliffhanger x.x I'm curious, though it may have been mentioned and I just missed it, did they find him prior to him accessing the computer and were already on their way or did Gozaburo have people prepared to leave the second he turned on a computer but see he wasnt using his own so they couldn't have known it was him. Unless they were keeping an eye on everyone who had had contact with Seto and assumed it was him who was sending a virus from Pegasus's computer. They already burned down the game shop so I suppose its likely they were already on their way to duelist kingdom.

I really cant wait to see Roland's reaction to the abuse Seto suffered at pegasus's hands. I dont believe he knew that would happen becouse I dont believe he would have put him in that position if he had.

I needs more q.q

AAAAAAH this is intense. What will they do!?

There’s something deeply satisfying about Cadenza’s descent into madness. It’s gradual and expected, grotesque and terrifying, suddenly all the warning signs are out at once, screaming and in your face. Every time the character focus shifts the narrative does too. It’s subtle but I love it. The contrast between how Seto looks at Pegasus and how Pegasus looks at Seto adds real depth to the gravity of the situation.

What Pegasus thinks and what he says are two different worlds: one calculated, one unchecked. He’s so deeply delusional, and Seto so thoroughly aware of it at every turn. You can feel the tension building in each of them and amounting to such different things.

Part of me applauds Seto for keeping so cool under pressure and the other part was hoping he’d hightail it out of there while Pegasus was pouting.

This whole time I was thinking Gozaburo’s “threat” was a lie, now I’m wondering if it’s some kind of masterfully orchestrated compromise. Gozaburo gets his revenge and Pegasus keeps what’s left of him?

I’ve been on the edge of my seat for every word and can’t wait to find out!

All the best and every success with writing!

Those last two lines are everything.

Wow...Somehow I wasn't expecting Pegasus's reasons in this chapter but looking back it makes a lot of sense. I'll have to reread for hints I may have missed!

I still love this story, I wander what pegasus will ask of Seto :p

I am so glad you've updated this! Great chapter. I hope you're doing well

This is SO intense! Aaaaaah! I have no idea what will happen next and it's amazing! Gozaburo and Aizawa must have been planning this for a LONG time.

Wow, I was on edge this whole chapter. Great one! I'm glad you've updated :D

this is really good, I'm excited to see where you take it!

Woah, that was an eloquent and very vivid chapter. I love the imagery of Pegasus's eye, the blood. I love his statuesque trance and the fear that surges through Seto. It's actually quite hard to follow at times, and I had to re-read quite a few sentences multiple times. I thought that kind of added to it though - since it was so confused, jumbled, and only halfway based in reality. Very good chapter. I can't wait to read what you have planned next for this story, and I wish you happy writing! :)

Ah yes, the part when Seto Kaiba goes Macgyver. My favorite part. Another good chapter. This one was far more revealing than the others. I had the impression that while Pegasus was making thinly veiled threats, his assertions about wanting to keep Seto safe might actually be true. Well, they may STILL be true, but it looks like he's far more interested in breaking Seto down. I find it interesting that Isono knows where he is. I feel like Pegasus should be more bothered by this. Very interesting. Awesome story so far. I'm sad that the next chapter is the last update I'll get for a bit, but I'm glad you wrote it all so far!

Once again, I feel like all this talking is taking us in circles so far. I'm so lost and yet so intrigued! And only two more chapters to get through for now. Aaahh! Awesome job once again! I loved the phone call, and I'm glad to know Mokuba's safe. Isono knowing for so long - that's really odd to me. What is going on man?