Somehow I’m just coming across this fic. Absolutely love it

Just want to point out in the last few chapters you kept switching between Irene and Karen.

What a heartwarming story. I am so glad that you persisted to complete the story. Thank you.

I realize this was written a while ago, but I was worried Linda would turn out to be like Meghan Markle's terrible father. Thanks for taking this a different way.

Amazing love scene I felt it, that's a good thing

I am sorry, I felt cheated and irritated with your long winded story at chapt 30 that I hv to scroll down to realise there r more dragging boring useless details. Just decided no point wasting time on a story w unnecessary details just for ending.

Hope you take this as constructive advice and cut length n unneccessay dragging details.

Good luck for next project.

Pissed with my wasted time

This is much better

Frustrating as the story is toooooooo lengthy

Loved this story! Thank you so much for sharing 3

You have a great plot going but your grammar and punctuation are really really bad. I'm sorry for being so mean but it's the truth. Sorry!

Well...Sarah and Jareth seem to be quite the horny couple. This is really a sweet story and I am enjoying it very much.
Thanks for keeping us entertained. Good job

I absolutely loved this story :) great work :)

Nice I'm a big fan of love scenes

Thought Sarah was gonna get her some well maybe next time

Good story! Some punctuation problems throughout but still good.