Ok

Hope to hear more

I'm back, I loved this chapter?
Finally we get some explanations, I suspected that she wasn't Ramsay's betrothed when he said 'attacked by our enemies' that reminded me oh so much of that 'poisoned by our enemies' that Ramsay said after killing his own father. Essentially whenever something happens because of 'our enemies' it's always Ramsay's fault.
Anyways... So she's a Stark huh? Poor Theon\Reek that has to see Ramsay play his little games with another Stark.
I'm extremely curious to find out who are the people in the end of the story.
Okay I'll now end this super long review 'cause I don't want to bore you any further...
(Btw I've updated another chapter fyi)
Love you,
Nicole

Omg pls update quick cause I can't wait to read more? This prologue left me v curious.
(I also wrote a story about got, so if you want check it out and tell me how you find it?)
Love,
Nicole

['The Gods are cruel', She thought]

Thoughts should go in italics without quotes, otherwise it’ll look like she’s talking to herself.

Well, it's a nice start, but there should be a little more than that. The chapter's way too short to stand on its own, being that it's so vague as to what's going on. Who is she? Why is the chamber on fire?