This is adorable! I barely even made it past the first couple sentences before a smile blossomed on my face. You did a great job!

Oh... my... uhmmm... WOW! -pulls at collar-

That was incredible. You've done a miraculous job of capturing the heat, passion, and intimacy without going into detail on the anatomy of it all, and it paints a magnificent tableau - more akin to a painting than a photograph is the best analogy I can think of.

Elsa must have been so completely and utterly floored to see Anna moving like that while wearing her jacket in such a fashion...

I also really enjoy the correlation of canon elements to story elements - a prime example being Elsa keeping herself away from Anna in order to protect her from herself (in this case, from her more than sisterly intentions).

This is amazing as a one-shot. That said, it would also make an incredible mid-late chapter of a longer story which opens highlighting their earlier years - expanding upon Elsa's distancing herself paired with the growth of both of their feelings leading up to this moment, and then continues past this to explore their more connected and deepened relationship together. ... Sorry, my mind kind of just ran with that one for a minute. :S

For the love of all that is good, what have you done to my heart? ;_; -clutches chest-

This is wonderfully written, yet so terribly painful to bear witness to. :( The pain that Elsa's leaving causes both of them... -whimper- -sob-

I am eagerly anticipating the launch of the full work.

Deeply amusing, and very cute. Flustered Anna was so funny to read, especially with Elsa being completely unaware of what she was doing to her. Elsa's anger at being trapped and the way she was treated (seriously, bologna on the head?) seems completely justified. :/

-crosses fingers in hopes of a continuation in the future-

Woah! That was super hot! I love sophisticated Elsa and clumsy Anna. I seriously don't blame Anna for wanting her own sister, Elsa, if she wears a suit, I mean come on, Elsa just has to look absolutely stunning in one no doubt!
Hopefully you add more to these one shots!:)

Oh wow hotness overload. That was amazing

First of all, you are not the latest Elsanna week person ever (I still haven't finished my part 2 of the Animals).

And WOW. That was well done. So incredibly hawt and the descriptions. ;_; UGH.

...Huh. Not gonna lie, I'm thoroughly confused. And yet... I'm incredibly intrigued. You mentioned this was an excerpt of a much bigger story; any chance of chapter 1 being expanded?

That... was wonderful. Honestly, one of my favorite "shape-shifting" stories to date; consider making a follow-up in the future cuz really, this was great :D

That... was wonderful. Honestly, one of my favorite "shape-shifting" stories to date; consider making a follow-up in the future cuz really, this was great :D

Okay, that needs a follow up. I don't usually like stories where one character is also an animal but that was cute. So it needs a follow up. Maybe Elsa can learn to shapeshift at will... for... reasons ( ͡ ͜ʖ ͡)

-spooths

Ah you don't need to hope 'cause I totally love it! And too bad it's just nearly NSFW lol.
Can't wait for the next one! Keep up the good work ;)