More please

*Laughs* Oh poor Tony! I know I'm not supposed to bash him but this is too funny! :)

This was so cute! I loved the details and descriptions in the story, it makes everything so real! As always, great job! :D

Fantastic!~ (have you thought about doing a story about Peter's reveal of Spiderman? Like JJJ, Gwen's family, Peter's teachers... Ect.)

I think Tony is a tad bit too old to be doing flips and tricks with a Spider anytime soon...

Lol

Can you do story where Peter is six years old and one day he gets told that Aunt May dying from a heart attack and they tell him to come to hosptail to say goodbye when he talk to his Aunt the doc tells him that they called Steve Rogers because they know that Peter was with the Avengers when is Aunt first came into the hosptail the doc also ask him if he knows if he any family left and Peter says that he doesn't know so the says that they checking to see if has any family left and Peter to busy talking to his Aunt that he doesn't know that Steve and Clint showed up but once his Aunt as died he hears someone talking to him it takes him a while to know that Steve is talking him then he notecies that Steve is going to pick him up and starts putting up a fight because he doesn't want leave his Aunt and once he is in Staves arms he fights him even more and Steve notecies a nurse coming to them and she tells that she needs to talk to him so he puts Peter on the ground and try's to keep from freeing his hand but Peter gets free and is almost back in the room when someone stops him and he didn't that know Clint was whit them earlier but now he notecies that Clint is the one who stopped him from going back in the room when Steve sees that Clint has Peter he turns back to the nurse and she tells him that they found Peters last family member when Steve ask who it is she tells Steve that Peter is his son and he is shocked to learn that he as a son when they are done talking Steve goes over to where Clint and his son are he can tell that Clint got Peter to clam down a bit but is still trying get out of Clint's arms but can tell that Peter is getting tired. Steve is Peters dad and Peter stays the size of a six year old and is mentally disabled and can't talk that great. (ps There is No romance between Steve and Tony only Steve is Peters father) Only reason is that I don't romance between Steve and Tony is I like to see how Steve wolud do as a single Father and so far I have found story's with Tony being Peters father by himself or it is both Tony and Steve as Peters fathers and I haven't found one where it is only Steve as Peters father that's way no romance between them in this story. Loved it and it was really funny. Thanks :)

pfft this was brilliant! xD I loved it, it would have been amazing if at the end they discovered that they still had the coms on and everyone heard, but I loved this XD :P

HAHAHHA OH GOD, THIS WAS GR8! I'm laughing so hard fucking Tony... Peter I love u man. This was very well written, good job.

If only this was in the movie. My life would be complete.

Aww, this was so great! I loved it! As muchh as I adore angst, it's nice to read something lighthearted sometimes and this was just the thing for that!

Your writing of Tony and Peter's interactions were cute! I loved how eager and willing to help out Peter was and Tony's reluctance. From the dialogue/exchange to Tony's little gesture at the end was perfect and very canon of their characters. Excellent work, you've nailed them!

This was short but sweet, and a good balance of action and humor. Poor Tony, Peter was being a little shit and the rest of the team probably planned it or at leadt found it amusing. I like roller coasters and such so I can't say I would mind web-slinging, clearly Tony is more the smooth-sailing type. Ah well, he'll live even if his pride is a bit bruised.