Reviews for A False Angel
Mastersgtjames chapter 3 . 6/19
ugh... why do so may authors go for the emo, goth, dark avenger, weabo, evil MC. The snapped, cracked, numbed emotions, random sociopath.
Mastersgtjames chapter 2 . 6/19
MC should go divine mind and stuff. Get the skills. The tools to make the tools to be OP. then when parahumans roll round, MC can study that stuff. Haywires tech, etc. So he is not trapped on Bet. Also, Loads of cool powers without being some boring weebo eldrich horror.
Allhailthesith chapter 8 . 9/6/2019
Bullshit.
sharingankakashi007 chapter 1 . 11/1/2018
Kinda deserved that
Welcome to Earth Bet
Sin Ouroboros chapter 1 . 10/10/2018
This is incredible, I can’t wait for a update
Stonerguy420 chapter 8 . 7/20/2018
Seriously? Use thw damn telepathy with illusionist and go aizen on them fuckers. Or itachi uchiha.
Hell cpukd just use telepathy and go charles xavier on somebody like alexandria. If you cant hurt the body hurt the mind. Could make a hero go crazy by making them think they are attacking him when really they just killed some civillians.
IncognitoMinerals chapter 8 . 1/17/2018
Yeah, nah. This "adversary" a shit. A shit! So is this dumb ass fucking "goddess" and her "muh balance" bullshit you've got going on. Just, garbage writing all around. Really, it's for the best you stopped writing it here.
vladimr1996 chapter 8 . 12/1/2017
This is my new addiction! Keep it up!
marsolino chapter 8 . 11/27/2016
I hope you find the Goddess after you kill the antagonist and show her your displeasure
marsolino chapter 4 . 11/27/2016
With Demonic Pact you are able to GAIN 100 additional points, not HOLD 100 points, then spend them and gain them again...
OakheadLord chapter 1 . 8/27/2016
Huh, the protagonist is a real psychopathic asshole, isn't he?

Demonic Pact isn't even that good, Ancient Mysteries has the potential to give you 1000 points without infringing on morality. So he is obviously doing this to be edgy.
marsolino chapter 2 . 8/27/2016
How can he be 16 when he spent ten years waiting for souls?
alex.rushing.5 chapter 8 . 8/9/2016
Favved.
Creus chapter 8 . 8/8/2016
Great chapter! Good to see you're back!
So that's the antagonist eh? I wonder what tinkertech bullshit he did.
Have you thought about making a PHO interlude? Everyone loves them!
Eurigos chapter 7 . 8/6/2016
This is pretty interesting, I look forward to more chapters
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