| Reviews for SL: Fate Dominance |
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   Ryu wolf chapter 14 . 5/27 Nicely done with this chapter can’t wait to read the next chapter |
| ExEcutE Rh0d0dactyl0S chapter 8 . 5/21 does this mean the ainsworth family will make an appearance |
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/3 Do fate grand order next |
| Atryx10 chapter 14 . 3/28 I can't wait to see Dracula fight another Dracula! |
| Atryx10 chapter 1 . 3/26 I really loved the first story in this, love this chapter as well. |
| Shadic21 chapter 14 . 3/24 Excellent chapter, I want to see the next part. |
| mingsyfongxay chapter 14 . 3/23 Could you please do fate apocrypha next |
| Stratos263 chapter 14 . 3/22 Good luck Silver Faction |
| yann0406 chapter 14 . 3/22 More please |
| Uday Sra chapter 14 . 3/21 good |
| karuma012 chapter 14 . 3/21 It's alive! Thanks for the chapter and looking forward for more! Even the Omake! |
| R-king 93 chapter 14 . 3/21 Awesome chapter |
| ThreshColten chapter 8 . 3/21 yo jabroni , if you want to write nonsense you can , but please put in your summary that this doesn't follow any structure and doesn't make a lick of sense. Besides the fact that you can't decide if Morderd is a woman or man( using his/he and then reffering to that character with she ) Now the other thing that this story lacks is a real Naruto or at least an AU or OOC Naruto .. you should change the main character to OC , not even making connections to the Naruto universe just saying he was a knight( with a lame name) in the 11th century then he went fullmetal alchemist to turn himself into a vampire , died , reincarnated a bunch of times because "chaos wanted him alive" then "died for good" when he was killed by his own son but wait there is a person in the future that is possesed by chaos and saves your OC who now has god powers . A mediocre story with no plot . |
| W1rath56 chapter 14 . 3/21 Alright well Ill start it off right from the bat saying this story is garbage. Nothing made any sense, you ignored everybodys skills and what was supposed to be an epic fight with iskandar and darius turned into like a 10 sentence fight that was over the next time I blinked. You basically added no tension, everybody got a super happy ending which isnt bad but theres literally nothing bad that happened at all. You made everybody op by adding buffs to them and you have clear favoritism. The romance you cant even call it that as there was almost zero interaction between all the girls and ‘naruto’ by making naruto basically godlike as nothing really damages him, he can easily take on any servant with zero problem. The story isnt worth it for all the people seeing this |
| xirons20 chapter 14 . 3/21 Good chapter |
