Please update, I love it

Sorry continuing. Natsu x mirajane because natsu is part demon and mira uses demon take over soul magic so she's like a demon.

I say Natsu x Mirajane bec

I'm saddened, to see that people take out their aggression on the writer is very disappointing what you should do instead is give constructive criticism. I am saving this fanfic for after I finish the part of the story that was adopted.

ima bit angry that you made erza die that was a stupid fucking move considering the r system would have never worked because zeref isnt dead through the whole sieres hes alive under the alias emperor spriggan and i know that technically this is a au and you can do what you want story wise i just think is was a extremely stupid decision on your part considering the story would loose value in my opinion if erza isnt thier when he gets back also juvia was at the r system she could have helped and theres also plenty of things you could use to save erza if you didnt know what to do like she could fly away with black wing empress or heavens wheel armor im not angry im just really upset that you killed erza before natsu came back if you wanted to kill her fine but do it after natsu returns it adds more emotion in my opinion like ya i get that oh she died because he wasn't there to save her but that's a over used trope and im not even upset because if anything its lucy's fault for being a bitch and excluding natsu

That's no way to write a fanfic. You don't skip it cuz your bored.

Oh come on! You can’t let this end here! This is so good!

Continue?

Pls make more this fic is great!

Here's my flame, don't start a story when you don't finish it, your leaving me with a tucking cliffhanger, I also want to see more NaLe, there isn't enough stories that do it well, and it's starting to get good here, so come on

Oh i didn’t even see that levy was in the probably not, that makes me even more disappointed that you didn’t pick Mira. I dont know why but there is something about the nami pairing that I really like, either nami or naza is definitely my favorite pairing but I 100% agree that naza would not have made sense in this story. I also rather like the gavy? gajevy? pairing so I wouldn’t have minded if you had that happen, plus its sad how gajeel had to die. But what’s done is done, maybe if I would have seen this story sooner and voted so there was only a one vote difference you would have chosen different but I guess we’ll never know.

I am kind of sad that Levy somehow got more votes than Mira on this story but there is nothing that can be done I guess.

Just when it was getting good. You decide to stop updating

I really enjoyed reading this so far, too bad it probably won't ever get an update.

Continue please.