Reviews for Vacay
FrenChi chapter 13 . 11/10/2018
Where are you? Hope you're fine. I adore this story, sad you stopped to write it. See more of this captivating story, soon, maybe...
Guest chapter 13 . 4/12/2018
Hoping for an update. x
Dragonfly00 chapter 13 . 3/29/2018
Scrumptious and intimate - great quality writing. Also much appreciation for finishing this fandom.
Shomed chapter 13 . 2/19/2018
Awesome story! Can't wait to read more!
the sparkling blue chapter 13 . 2/16/2018
I'm glad that I finally managed to catch up with this story, cos it's so good! You definitely found the characters' voices and are doing a wonderful job with Bo and Lauren. Your tale is funny and endearing in the most delightful way and I couldn't stop reading it once I started. You're a talented writer and I want to thank you for sharing your gift with us. I know it may be hard or even uninteresting to write about Lost Girl these days, especially with the rise of other fandoms, but here you are and I'm deeply grateful! :)

Last but not least, kudos to you for your incredible sex scene. It was absolutely perfect, and so very Doccubus! Thanks again and I can't wait for the next chapter!
koskat chapter 13 . 2/11/2018
That was more than worth the wait. As much as I loved the intimacy between Bo and Lauren, what I liked most is the way Lauren described her relationship with Bo. It shows how special they really are and what they mean to each other. This really is a great story about all of them as a group and the chemistry they share. I hope Lauren finds a way to make the water work for her and Bo especially since it gave Lauren stamina to keep up with Bo while curbing Bo's hunger. Thank you for a great story.
sylvy260206 chapter 13 . 2/11/2018
Thanks for updating and looking forward for the next chapters ;-)
Guest chapter 13 . 2/10/2018
Good to have you back! You did so great with the sexy times :)
Thanks for sharing
Guest chapter 13 . 2/9/2018
Good to have you back! I love this story and will looking forward to the next chapters. Sorry to hear that your life is crazy oder hard sometimes, send you a virtual hug. And don’t worry, you did REALLY good with this one special scene ;)
Mammon chapter 13 . 2/8/2018
You sure did come back with a bang! I loved the update! Not only did Bo's inner Rae zero in on Lauren in her most primal state, showing her importance to both human Bo and face succubus Bo, but there was an acknowledgement that there is an inherent inequity in their relationship that just is. Bo doesn't feed or sex up others because she has a wandering eye and others aren't drawn to her just because she's so irresistibly beautiful, but because she's a succubus. I think the biological focus keeps the emotions out of it and allows them both to adjust to what is. Glad Lauren showed all kinds of class in letting Elyah down easy. No need to be rude in saying thanks, but no thanks. I love that she shared a bit of who she is in telling the warrior that she's no boob head in this relationship with a succubus. I hope the magic water helps Lauren find the answers she needs to be with her girl for a long long time. Hope to hear from you before a year passes again! Lol
FrenChi chapter 13 . 2/8/2018
Wow! You're back and this chapter, at its beginning, was like a Volcano! a VolcaBoLo eruption! :) Then I appreciated Lauren's total honesty with Elyah about Bo, her feelings and her life with Bo, including her knowledge and acceptance of Bo's feeds and schedule
I have to say, if Bo didn't exist, Elyah would have been the perfect creature for Lauren and Lauren for Elyah. I hope she will find someone to love and to live a happy life with :)
Now; now; now, with all this Magic Water, could it be possible that our BoLo did create alittle life of their own or not? Cant' wait to read more and thank you very much for coming back after everything you went through :)
Guest chapter 13 . 2/7/2018
Hullaluyu some one who sees the Bo,Lauren relationship for what it real was,and wrote about so succinctly. Even unbiased and beautiful. Bless you for your perception, foresight and talent.
Joannrbb chapter 13 . 2/7/2018
You did great. I was so excited when I saw the update. Thanks for writing with such busy things going on.
Guest chapter 13 . 2/7/2018
This is amazing. Thank you for continuing.
FrenChi chapter 12 . 1/23/2018
Hi dear MotherFaer, would you, pleeaasee, come back and finish this exciting end very good story? Your readers will thank you :) It's near 1 year: Updated: Mar 21, 2017.
I hope everything is fine for you
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