wow! That surprised me. I was sure it was a hidden Itachi...

I feel like ever since his stay in Ame this fic has taken a real turn for the worse here. I really dont like Narutos personality, its like hes Sasuke, just an obnoxious prick.

I gotta say I do really like basically everything about this story but Naruto is a real self righteous piece of shit, I was hoping when he got his memories back he would get better, but he is still an ass.

Didn't he only know that Aji chick for like 2 months? And he basically grew up as Inos brother, but even after getting his memories back he still wants to kill her? Kinda a dick move...

God, really annoying how Naruto brought up his "Aji-chan" basically every other sentence in this chapter. Fingers crossed you kill her off soon.

This story is dope. Cant wait for him to get his memories back and/or make contact with Kurama!

Great first chapter!

still enjoying it, but you like chaos too much author T-T

really liking it so far, but you kill off MC's so flippantly that it seem's no one is important other than keeping Naruto alive to tell a story. So it makes any other character unimportant. On the other hand, Naruto in this one is pretty over the top powerful in this, which I don't mind TBH, the constant death of characters makes it seem kinda irrelevant

A great story probably one of the top 15 naruto fanfiction I have ever read it had the length, punctuation, and grammar its rare to find good stories like these ones

You didn’t have to turn ajisai into Sakura in the end

In the end I think that this story was kinda...weak…open ended and not really conclusive.

There are several little nitpicks that I have, but they aren't really important and not your fault but rather a simple difference of opinion but...

Over all this didn't really feel like a Naruto story to me, to be honest I could hardly recognize Naruto as Naruto and several times I had a hard time suspending my disbelieve about some of the choices he made...

And this is where I stop reading, it’s to unbelievable to me that this is what you decide to do with the Rinnegan. What a pointless sad end for this story for me.

Such angst geez. First he loses himself (memories) being manipulated and such and he finally finds love just for her to die and have her corpse defiled. Just gross

This is so boring to read. It’s not bad, just very boring. The idea was very interesting, but in MY OPINION it came out very boring