Reviews for His Little Princess
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Guest chapter 2 . 6/10/2019
Chapter 3! Chapter 3! Chapter 3!
Guest chapter 2 . 5/25/2019
MORE!
Narnian Frost chapter 2 . 2/16/2019
I HATE YOU. YOU CAN'T LEAVE THE STORY! WHY? WWWHHHYYY?
L chapter 2 . 1/24/2019
how old is she? if she's scared her own father, how did she gather up the nerve to even look at Kronos, much less trick him?
Guest chapter 2 . 12/9/2018
Plz update plz
Guest chapter 2 . 4/3/2018
oh wow that, that was sad, sweet and heartwarming. thank you for that
thunderofdeath97 chapter 2 . 3/4/2018
please update soon
rileydcombs chapter 2 . 11/12/2017
This is freaking awesome
Reading Pixie chapter 2 . 8/17/2017
I love this please continue it
Edsheerancamogie chapter 2 . 2/22/2017
Love it i can't believe I only found your story now it's brilliant I hoped you'll update soon and for the next chapter could you please give further insight of why fem percy held onto her mask for so long I understand why she's breaking with everything crashing down on her, I would also love to see more family interaction then everyone else's reaction to the true fem percy just some thoughts if you want to use
I love your story and plot looking forward for your next update
keotaka1 chapter 2 . 2/9/2017
More please! I hope Percie can be happy!
JZeE chapter 2 . 11/25/2016
Total fluffiness.
CosmicPanda chapter 2 . 8/3/2016
abandoned, calling it! shame too.
Melodina chapter 2 . 7/14/2016
Good chapter!
Though I have to admit, it feels a bit rushed. You are writing about a highly sensitive and emotional topic, but personally I find it hard to grasp Percies feelings, but maybe that's just her missing thoughts. Everybody else seems portraied clearly enough for that matter. So maybe... just a personal preference or something.
I really like your idea of a compromise about where Percie will be staying to recover from her trauma. It is definitly a reasonable decision for her to join the hunt. When she is feeling better later in the story she can still beginn living with her dad or at leas spent more time with him. So that part is a great idea.
I like the way you described all the gods breaking down when hearing about Percies past. Especially Poseidon and Triton seem extremely upset.
Wonder for which reason you decided to change Sally to Samantha. Can't wait to find out.
Please update soon
Melodina
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