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Guest chapter 3 . 4/30 The library doesn't have anything but things written by Kudo Yusaku and Sir Arthur Conan Doyle? Have you seen their library? |
yuutojaden chapter 10 . 5/15/2019 please make the sequal |
zzzjem chapter 10 . 5/25/2018 I am so glad to have found this fic! I'm sorry it took me so long hahahahaha but anyway, I'd like to tell you that this is awesome. I really like the way you write! Every word just seems to weave together and it was so beautiful and smooth I think I'm going to cry dang it. And the characterization is amazing af lemme tell you! I especially like how the three detective boys are suddenly so enamored of Kaito and probably would fight tooth and nail to protect him and this phantom thief of ours doesnt even know the sort of power he holds in his hands because of this hahahahahaha Still! I love the concept of Kaito's "molester magnet" because yes plz, we need more sof and adorable kaito that needs protection. This guy is just a bundle of trauma waiting to explode and he needs all the luuuurvv. Also, I gotta thank you for taking his phobia seriously. I know how serious they can be and tho I don't have ichthyophobia, I have ornithophobia and lemme tell you how much it can fuck u up when ppl dont think to take it seriously. ANYWAAAAAY, I am sooooo curious how this would go from now because holy sht I didn't expect that villain? What the hecc? He's showing signs of Kaito-attraction holy sht its creepy af but I lyk it? I am so excited how this woukd turn out? Would he be creepy af and kidnap kaito and be convince that they should get married in hawaii and live the rest of their lives in madagascar? Ok wait I didnt intend to make him sound yandere af but that's the vibe i'm getting here. Also! All the detective boys are practically in love with Kaito. No, really, you mentioned KidCon and I absolutely do not object to that my biggest ship is Kaito/Shinichi or KidCon ahahahahahha (i saw somewhere u like shinichi being the more dominant one and I AGREE but not really in the dom/sub sense but u get me?) BUT BUT BUT I ALSO AM STARTING TO FALL IN LOVE WITH HEIJI AND KAITO BC WHAT THE HEDCC? Heiji is a possessive and protective and he can definitely deck people of they so much as look wrongly on Kaito's direction. I approve. Hakuba, on the other hand, he's fine hahahaha I lyk him the way you write him now 3 but pls give more interaction with heiji and kaitooo 3 ANYWAY, I'M SO THANKFUL THAT YOU SHARED THIS FIC WITH US. IT'S WONDERFUL AND AMAZING AND I THINK I FELL IN LOVE WITH KAITO (AND YOU) EVEN MORE. AAAAAA. I'M SO EXCITED FOR THE SEQUEL. I KNOW IT HAS BEEN YEARS BUT I'M NOT LOSING HOPE! I HOPE YOU'RE DOING WELL RIGHT NOW. You also mentioned being held down and pinned and I'm so sorry you have to experience such horrible event. The damage has been done and I can only hope that you are recovering well and doing good in life. I hope the person who did it to you will not be able to fet close to you ever again and harm you. |
JstarRobin chapter 1 . 1/3/2018 this is pretty good although it is slightly straying a bit from no pairings even though it is still hilarious also didn't the fight Kaito had with Yaiba only happen in conan's dream? |
Aquarica chapter 10 . 1/11/2017 Very nice story! I absolutely loved it, always nice to see the Detective Boys together |
Gddssgrl chapter 10 . 11/19/2016 This is ridiculously good I love it! Love your versions of the gosho boys and their over-protectiveness! It feels super realistic! I actually live in Japan though I am American so I really like the realistic touches you put on your stories that add to the Japanese feel! Good job! Can't wait for more! |
A chapter 10 . 9/29/2016 Please continue to keep this storyline free from slash between the gosha boys |
C chapter 10 . 9/29/2016 So how impatient will homaru be? How much will he research before going after them? (And how much information does he miss because of his impatience? Or vice versa, what information does he get for being patient?) What type of 'hunter/predature' is homaru's information gathering style? Will he start going to the heists himself? Will he go after the geniuses one by one (saving best for last? Or whoever becomes alone first?)? Or as a whole at the heists/other gathering locations? Since he hasn't found much information on conan, will homeru suspect that Conan is touichi kuroba's second son after his 'death'? (Because/Hence the brother-cousin relationship). Plus the fact Kaito, while doing well, doesnt seemed to have been labeled a genius either. So what is homaru's black org name? Will he try to feed the genius quartet info on the black org to distract them away from his own deeds/company? Or even for his own amusement? [he seems the type to use information as bait if it suits his purposes.] Why was he meeting up with a archetiect? What makes him so intrested in geniuses? Will he wash his hands of Snake? Will he use Snake as the person to kidnap Kaito? (Giving Snake one last chance to one-up/kill Kid with Kaito going missing?) Will Snake leave the BOrg is his younger brother does? Will he kidnap Kaito himself? If its at a heist, is it before or after the event itself? What else will make homaru possesive of kaito? (How will he react to the fact it's not just him who lusts after kaito?) Will he even try and justify his attraction/feeling for being intrested in the young magician? What experiments is homaru running? Does he plan to use one or more of the detectives as test subjects? For a moment i thought it was the apoxtin- just that it reacts like the capitain america formula (bring what's inside into a visible appearence) Will aoko regret certain aspects of her rotiune when hakuba scolds her? |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 10 . 9/29/2016 Great last chapter! Even though it wasn't ShinKai, I really liked this story (I did read it as a pre-ShinKai though). I'm looking forward to the sequel! Will there be any pairing this time or just bromance like here? :3 And I can't wait for the 'You belong with me' ShinKai story! I had to watch the video first before writing this review, so that I knew what you were writing about. ;) It seems really interesting and there are so many ideas in my head. Instead of singing Kaito could be practicing magic tricks and if you write the bench scene he could be playing with his doves. The football game could be soccer (where Shinichi helps out) or a murder case. Even that Kaito's his neighbor would be possible if we assume that he moved next to Shinichi to be close to him. But I'll see what you'll write, I'm looking forward to it! :D Btw. as this was the last chapter, don't forget to put the story as 'complete' and in chapter 7, there's still one mistake where giri and honmei is mixed up. :) |
Encryption System chapter 10 . 9/29/2016 Ahhhh! I love this so much ;-; hopefully the sequel will start soon, right? Right? Ideas for the sequel! I'd love to see an Akako-esque scene...except with Kaito in the middle, ya know? Like the girls (and maybe a few boys...) crowd around him? Looking forward to the next installment! :) -EotS- |
SilverQueen08 chapter 9 . 9/18/2016 Oh, sure! And fill us in about the stranger who saw them in the alley way! |
KaiShin Shipper chapter 8 . 9/14/2016 i don't really have any constructive criticism for you. but i can say i enjoyed the chapter! i can't wait for the next installment of this story! I love stories like these so please complete this, id hate to see this discontinued. XD :D |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 9 . 9/16/2016 Great chapter! Finally another reader who doesn't make fun of Kaito's phobia. So many unfortunately do and a phobia is no laughing matter, especially if it's as bad as Kaito's. He can't look at pictures, freaks out from plush toys and can't even say the word 'fish'. His is a really bad case and Aoko constantly using that against him is really mean (that's the reason I never really liked her). And the end was cute, I even laughed a bit. Even though this is not a KaiShin story (or ShinKai if we look at their adorable scenes), you still got me hooked with all those cute scenes between them that just make me squeal. xD Anyway, well done and I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I hope you'll write a sequel were they get even closer and take town the BO. :) The only thing that you should change is the honmei and giri references (which I stated in a previous review). :) |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 8 . 9/16/2016 Hey there! Please forget my comment on the previous chapter about bringing Kaito to a hospital. I totally forgot about the scars... several of them probably resemble bullet wounds which have to be reported to the police. The doctor's would surely have seen them and were forced to call the police on their findings. And the police would then find out that none of his scars have been reported and all the following drama would be horrible. |
Shana-Fujioka chapter 7 . 9/16/2016 The chocolate scene was really adorable, but you mixed up Honmei and Giri (Honmei romantically; Giri friendly). You should change that. I didn't really get why they were thinking about Conan's secret when they were thinking of Kaito's injury. It's not like he got stabbed as KID, so there should be no problem for them to call an ambulance and bring Kaito to a hospital (would be the right thing to do after calling the police because of the culprit). And why did the guy at the end get interested in Kaito? He doesn't know him and that the three detectives are together could be because they're friends (completely plausible). They do know each other from the Detective Koushien Case and Kaito's Hakuba's classmate, so they could just be meeting up as friends (which is even the truth). |