Read better. Also, what with that short lemon. And while i'm at it the writing seemed like a poorly done script for a porn video.

Well, that was pretty cool I don't know what Hitomi even looked like unlike Kushina and Mikoto who are both damn hot, Tsunade and Shizune huh, not a big fan but whatever, Anko and Kurenai now that one I'm looking forward to.

Well, that was quite enjoyable Mikoto is another babe some nice babes Tsunade is abit old but whatever

Well, that was pretty cool Kushina's a babe yea Naruto and her are son and mother but oh well

More chapters please
I love it update

Well, one scene that can’t happen while they have no clothes on is Naruto pulling down the back of Kushina’s panties and getting a pantyjob that way, with his “hot dog” (to avoid censoring) up against her “peach/taco” (censorship avoidance, again, hopefully you get what I mean by that) and the front of her panties being hit by the “hot dog’s” head. Or even just pulling the gusset (the spot where women put their pads when they get their monthly visitor. This is it’s actual name) aside and doing her like that. ... as you can probably tell, I have a bit of a panty fetish.

kukukukuku nice i want you to complete it so we can see what happens next but i wont rush you.

Uh... yeah... I've been waiting great author... will this story keep up?

Great job please continue it

please make more of this please

Really needs work on the structure, may not need much story but it's kinda messy

why would a woman get mad at a guy getting a boner, it's a goddamn fucking biological response to stimuli!

I loved it all six chapters were on point but wish u could've finished it

This fanfiction is awesome

HOTT! Keep going! Next up should be the wives of the Ino-Shika-Cho team, and Sakura’s mom Mebuki; as well as Tsume Inuzuka. You should also make it so Naruto’s jizz makes Tsunade young again.