I'd had imagined that Oberyn sent a raven from the Wall about Arya to Ned - he is a father of daughters himself, after all ...
Nice way to finish off the Boltons.
Borys

Groan - Cate giving Jon grief is not an Andal thing ...
Borys

Amusing.
A bit heavy on Catelyn bashing.
My my, Jon doesn't think small - Velaryon, Celitigar, Dayne ... there are smalfolk from the Crownlands (Driftmark, Dragonstione, Kings Landing ...) with violet eyes. Not to mention guest sex workers from Essos ... yet the boy looks at top level aristocrats only ...
I will give this version a go - not inetrested in re-write as it seems to have Varys in it.
Borys

I hope you are still writing this story it's very good

It’s a shame that you seem to be not writing anymore, this story and the bloody wolf are my two favorite asoiaf fics.

Pity this fix was abandoned, alone the image makes it worth reading

Oberyn is such a great character. Another wonderful plot twist. Great story

nice

I like it. Omake even more.

my favorite part of ur story has to be the omake. I laughed for ages after reading it. great story!

Great chapter I like how you put Ethan Forrester from the teltail game in this chapter ,and I am looking forward to the next update.

Looking forward to more

revive and update this is VERY interesting to read

Absolutely fantastic story. Jon and Dany have no idea who they're living with and I can't wait for the both of them to find out. The omake was awesome. Love to see it happen in the story and end up in Westeros anyway.

Over all good chapter but you give away the ending. Anyhow I would still love to read more of your story.