Reviews for The Kingdom of Ends
Bea chapter 28 . 7/13/2018
Hi. After watching the disappointing finale, I was really in need of a story that gave Kalagang the happiness they deserved. Your story did just that, and more. Thank you so much. I leave this story feeling a sense of peace and closure.
RickysMichy chapter 28 . 2/23/2018
I’ve been reading this story nonstop for three days now! It was so engaging I couldn’t even stop and review lol. Truly enjoyed it and when I reread (because I definitely will) I’ll leave a review for each chapter. Such an creative and thrilling story!
ArthursCamelot chapter 28 . 10/10/2017
Bless you for indulging my Kalagang feels. I love how you wrote them both.
missjordyn chapter 10 . 6/22/2017
Whoah. Your smut writing is fantastic. Can't wait to get to the rest of the story. Thank you for writing and sharing it with all of us!
Lady-Plague-6661 chapter 28 . 6/13/2017
this was so perfect! just what i needed! excellent writing! i have to say you had me staying up to four am just so i could make sure everything would be okay. job well done!
h8erade chapter 12 . 5/16/2017
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Guest chapter 10 . 5/15/2017
Yay for smut! Beautifully written! Bravo!
Guest chapter 9 . 5/15/2017
I love the connection you draw between love and quantum chemistry. Google, if you will: NaCl (Sodium Chloride) by Kate and Anna McGarrigle. A little love song about a sodium atom finding a bride... changing its name from chlorine to chloride. Fun stuff.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/15/2017
I think you write Wolfgang better than Kala. Also, nice fight scene. I tried to write a fight scene once and it sucked. I really appreciate a well written fight scene. Nicely done.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/15/2017
Ah fluff! Love fluff! This was very satisfying :)
Guest chapter 6 . 5/15/2017
Hmmm... i feel like Kala is a bit out of character and I don't think Rajan would be so easy about it. But I also kind of don't care because she as Wolfgang neen to be together.
Guest chapter 4 . 5/14/2017
I'm four chapters in and really enjoying this. Just finished watching season 2 the other day and was looking for something to keep me in that world. You write beautifully. I think sense 8 fanfic is really hard to write with so many characters to keep straight. Well done.
IKST chapter 13 . 4/14/2017
I'm in love with this fanfic. I'm pretty much a sucker for everything that's related to Kalagang, but your story is so beautiful and well written, it has given me back the feelings I had when I watched the christmas special. I loved how in the end, Kala became stronger and sharper while Wolfgang softened. The plot, the way you developed it, the cluster's chemistry, all were on point.

This definetely is going down as one of my favorites fanfics ever, one of the best i've read next to Reality. I'll be paying attention to your publications, keep the great work up!
Andreaeb182 chapter 18 . 2/27/2017
Hello there! I'm Andrea and i would like to apologise for my excuse of english. I've not practiced it as much as I would like. I have read your fic in one day and I can say, it is AMAZING! I loved it. I couldn't stop thinking about it. I had to keep reading it until I finished (which i did at work. And that's really funny 'cause I had a ton of Rx that needed a written report). I'm a Colombian girl living in Germany. So It was really cool to imagine a lot of things. And I'm so hopelessly in love with Wolfgang... that I want to see him be happy with Kala.
I hope to read more from you! An have a nice day!
Andrea
Guest chapter 28 . 2/24/2017
This is great! I stayed up a few nights way past a sensible time to read it. I love how you wrote Kala and Wolfgang, and the rest of cluster! My only suggestion would be to use contractions sometimes, such as "I'm" or "don't", instead of "I am" or "do not". Sometimes it doesn't sound natural for the character to say the whole thing, like "I am", especially for the American ones. Will and Nomi would definitely use the contracted form. Other than that small thing that bothered me, and a few grammar mistakes here and there, it was very enjoyable!
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