OOC

I love the story but I'm not sure of the Percy and Hermione thing because I hope Percabeth happens.

Hi, it me again...
It's been a really long time since you wrote this story. Whenever I write I like constructive criticism, so I'm giving you a bit.
First of all, you have probably been getting this a lot, but proof reading your work more than once is best, and getting someone else to go everything is better. This will remove most to all of your spelling, punctuation and grammar mistakes.
Next, you have already said this, but it would be so much more amazing if you didn't copy and paste quite that much. Even if it writing it how you remember, if you write it yourself from memory, you will be able to make it much more unique.
Thirdly, ere are way too many time skips, maybe it is just me, but I am actually struggling to remember the storyline because it jumps from his eleventh birthday a whole year, and a lot more.
And one last thing, Percy in the sky really doesn't work, as well as the other little things like ron's hair colour.
HOWEVER
This story has such potential. Although you have written so much, you can edit it slowly. You can add noted in like you are writing it again, so new readers will know you are in the process of fixing it.
Thank you for writing so much, and keeping up with this story.
I'm not normally someone who writes really long reviews, I don't really write them ever, butI saw so much potential, I just had to add my plea!
Keep writing!
From a late night reader..

I know you wrote this a while ago and you probably won't see this, but come on, skipping a whole year?! That's a bit much...Why am I the only one who cares...

only on chapter 3 but really enjoying it thanks!

this story is absolute trash

Loved it. Perfect pairing

I like the concept, but I'm a bit confused why Percy isn't play. The grammar needs a lot of work, but I think u have a great story

Loved this book, I had been the only thing I have read for the past four day’s and I don’t think a book has ever made me feel more attached, emotional or thrilled all in one before. It was an incredible work of art and you talent for writing is tremendous. Keep on writing and follow your dreams, this book brought me happiness as I’m sure it will many others !

Athena is being petty.

Only the first chapter in, and I'm already hooked.

Percy tried to think, but his brain now was filled with seaweed.

I'm getting fed up with that phrase and its variations.

Percy sleeping too much seem to be the theme here. That's annoying.

July comes before August, you know that? If it's Percy's birthday then then it's already passed two weeks and a half since Hogwarts stopped accepting letters from students.

chapter 40 is in a bold print that feels sorta uncomfortable...i dont know what do do about that but im going to try and read it anyways despite how the whole chapter makes me feel like its a long author's note...im too used to seeing authors notes in bold