Is torri a guy or a girl? fucks sakes stick with He or She

I feel like the MC often doesn't completely think things through. "Prisoners with the intention of harming somebody" is incredibly vague. Either it keeps the girl who resolves to slap her abusive father, or it ignores the guy who spontaneously murders when he feels like it. Another example was helping the small villages with barriers earlier in the story. If they're really overrun with dark guilds, it seems like those would just take the barriers for themselves without the villagers themselves being able to make use of them much. I forgot to comment this on the corresponding chapter. Either way, maybe I'm overlooking something, but it feels like he's seriously lacking in foresight.
His ship also feels absolutely broken, and I feel like such a massively advanced system should be beyond his skill, or any other single person's skill, for that matter. I'll assume magic makes things much easier, but almost all great feats of engineering in our world are instead from teams of experts over an extended period of time. It would feel better if at least it had been a long time project in the story, but just randomly throwing it in there makes it feel incredibly cheap to me.
Also, I understand the protagonist is supposed to be a genius, although I'm not sure it's because of the extra knowledge or beyond that, but the way he's so smug about it and has to rub it in people's faces makes him kind of unlikeable to me.
Also, it feels like his friend's potential demise was completely forgotten here, which is kind of jarring. It felt similar when Lucy was distraught over her mother's coming death, and then that was completely brushed over with excitement over the MC's future plans.
Given all that, I'm still enjoying this story, and I'm probably gonna continue. I just wanted to get this stuff off my chest.

I really wanna curse you right now, but I can't cuz I'm fasting. cuz if I wasn't I'd be cursing vou real bad

Author-san you have a mistaje in this chapter. Lucy said Nick instead of Cole in this partSo Nick, do you have a name in mind?"

I hope you rewrite it soon. If you do, can you maybe add a little of the Captain Who and Goldilocks influence into the story? As in, I really want the Fairytail guild to do some reactions to some of Captain and Goldilock’s adventures. Or maybe a past foe comes after Lucy, and then the guild gets to hear about some of Captain and Goldilock’s shenanigans.

I found myself skimming through most of the fight. At first it was interesting, but then you just went and stretched it out so much that even Bleach looked more interesting... Can't wait till it eventually returns to canon cuz I really don't want to drop this. I've really liked the stuff before this arc.

coward...and wtf with all this hypocrisy in a form called Roy lol

This story is just getting old with the banishment and now oh why and another oh why it’s just repetitive

10/10 one of the best stories ive read in a while

Loves it~!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
I enjoyed this way more than I thought I would. I hope that Roy gets cleared of his false crimes soon so he can achieve his dream!

Love your story, cant wait to see the redo. Hope you the best of luck with this story.

Hello Marisandini, in the spirit of the season and in hopes of one day hearing through the grapevine about something as beautifully generous as the idea “Pay It Forward”, I’ve decided to start “Just a Few Minutes”, which I hope will encourage people to take just a little time to write informal, polite reviews to stories they’ve read and enjoyed that will brighten a stranger’s day with the simple goal of giving just one more happy moment in their day. Everyone’s heard about how just saying hello to someone else can help that person get through a trying day. Well, if that’s true then why not spread around an internet message that can do something similar for people who will never who you are but may need that “hello” and don’t get enough of them in person. Everyone will at some point go on the internet, it’s just a thing people do nowadays, so let’s make the trolls and flamers a little less prominent by spreading around a positive response for the simplest reasons, someone’s presence. It takes “Just a Few Minutes” to brighten someone’s day and there is no reason you can’t just copy and paste a simple happy message into a text box. So please help me spread around something that takes so little effort but can make even one person’s day that much better. And as a personal touch, I’m going just a little bit further, have a story recommendation that may give you just one more thing to look forward to reading, go try out “Tsuki ga Michibiku Isekai Douchuu”, the manga or the translated web novel. Have a wonderful day and I wish you a lucky start to the new year.

It's like the level of English deteriorates the more I read. Find an editor. On the whole it's a decent story though.

I love this story so far, so please post up a note in this story once you’ve posted up the rewrite. ! The best oc Fairytail fanfic I’ve currently read!

I apologize for the comment below...rereading that, it became obvious it was his first real encounter with mortal enemies...so that first reaction understandable