Story was really enjoyable but would have read better if it wasn't broken up by random mass effect crossovers, though they were entertaining. Should have been a separate thing.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Also... wtf why: Mass effect cross over chapters?
Makes absolutely no sense, is distracting and seems like it is either a pit for dumping the unfitting pieces, or rea for experimentation.

Probable reason for lost interestraptor with human aspects and physical characteristics
- would be better written from POV of a slightly older and more mature OC
- slightly over humanized raptors
- mopey dwelling on past
- isn’t utilizing the potential ofimma raptur? Fuck yeah, gonna be best repturr ever er- I mean *RAPTOR NOISESingen doesn’t really need to be involved but is for the purpose of having additional plot outside of ‘Life as a raptor’ who is no longer able to fap to DeviantArt

• would rate story so far as a hesitant 4/10 I guess.

This is really interesting! Please continue

Ahwahhhh! I hope he's okay D:

Yay! Awesome. I like how this is going, and the omake are interesting as well. Keep it up please! :D

Yay for Blue mass effect omake! This should an actual story of it own :D

I like it. :) Please, if you can, do a rasom part 3. I would like to see Fake Skin's and the Indominus' reaction when they get to the raptor paddock. Also, keep going with the story I am really liking it.

would be cool if blue came on the island

interesting

I think you should edit it then post it. Also I liked the last side story. It was funny and fun to read.

Your story is very fun to read, very interesting and quite good. I would recommend you edit your work first before posting, it would give the impression that you care for what you post and that you would take pride in it. I have just a single request: please do not stop writing this series, I enjoy reading it. Keep up the goodwork, and goodluck on your marks hope you did really well.

review :)

God fucking damn it dude... I love it. I don't get why the raptors have a fascination with Oreos. I see it in basically every fix. Can you make a authors note next chao and just explain that to me? Cheerio. Good chap.