THIS? was so good wow I really enjoyed the way you wrote both Kim and Monty but overall the story was super creative and I loved the concept! Very on par for Monty, too. I know this is an older fic but damn I’d love to see a continuation of this or just more MF/KP from you!

Please continue!

So, First. Awesome writing, you totally took my breath away and I litterally couldn't turn away from my screen until the end of the chapter.
After that i re-read the chapter and I froze at some points. This is actually very dark. The way Monkey Fist planned this make it, vile, kinda disgusting. It's like a snake charming his prey before eating it (capturing it in this case.)
Kim had barely a say in the matter considering the gem altered her feelings and will continue to do so since you say she "belong to him: mind, body and soul".
The story in itself is amazing but I hope it won't be portrayed as a love story because the way you wrote it make it more like control than love.
Expecting the next chapter with great interest.

OH what a great story I can't wait until the next chapter

O.M.G. Breathtakingly beautiful, ravishingly sexy, lush and lavish, a true jewel in the crown that you do not see all the time - and should never be taken down in the future for ANY reason. :D I'm glad I was of help.