Yes, I like the speed at which their relationship progressed. I don't know how to feel about Marinette cursing, mostly because nobody else has cursed. If everybody's cursing that's fine it normalizes the cursing, but because the only person cursing if Marinette, it just makes her look like she has a sailor's mouth. I encourage people writing they're own songs and music, I sometimes write my own songs too and I love singing. However, when I'm reading and I'm trying to imagine Marinette singing it makes it harder if I personally don't know the song, or how it goes, so I try making up a beat in my head and it kinda distracts from the story. So far you've only done Adrienette with just a smidge of Marichat, me personally I love Marichat, but there's also Ladrien, Ladynoir, AlyaNino, ChloeNathaniel, AlixKim, RoseJuleka, Lukanette, KagamiLuka, MaxSabrina, MyleneIvan, GabrielNatalie, KimChloe, ChloeSabrina, NathanielMarinette, and MarcNathaniel. So with that you can make a happily ever after chapter where all the ships sail. if you need more puns go to pinterest and search cat jokes, also congrats on doing the AP Exam my sister is in AP and I would die if I had to do that much studying.

VICTORY DANCE ! Adrienette YES!

I'm a teen and I don't curse so I don't get your point

i am PAWsitive that MEW will be able to find some PUNtatic puns.
Clawsitive
Pawsitive
Mew (you)

This story is awesome so far! What is going to happen next?! Please update soon!

I thought it was the formatting issues that’s been going on lately with both ao3 and here that’s throwing things off. But some things that I notice (and I’m not the best with grammar) is that you should spell out a number, it looks cleaner even if it’s not technically correct after number ten...or is it one hundred... and while mari is timid it’s not studdering- she switches her words like when she’s trying to say beautiful weather we are having, she says you’re beautiful this morning then word vomits till she says it correctly.

Avoid the word “very”. As the late robin Williams said in the dead poets society- “very is lazy, if some one is very tired then they are exhausted...” ext.

I see Mari being a fan of Halestorm, pretty reckless, within temptation and evanescence due to her love of jagged stone but also like Katy perry, Jessie J, and David gets. Maybe some pussycat dolls no doubt/ Gwen stefani, and p!nk. And those are just female singers and bands...throw some shinedown and breaking Benjamin, stone sour, maroon 5, Florida, and walk the moon (I swear shut up and dance should be that cinnamon bun couple’s song- i also have a link for some choriogrophy for that song if she wants to try to dance to it...) for the male side and there’s a decent playlist. I know I’m missing some but it’s 1am...

Here's some catpuns, since u asked

This is a CATastrophe

PURRfect

PAWsome

PAWful

I might send more of i think of any

"Based on the AU where she can sing" well who the fuck said she couldn't sing. Cristina Vee (voice actor for Marinette) actually has a really nice singing voice.

I think the song should be about not being able to tell your crush the way you feel also I really like this story please keep it up it would be a catastrophe to take it down

Claw-some,
Purr-ity
Purr-fect
Paw-tacular
Paw-some
Bell-boy
Purrinces
Buginette
Pawsitive
Paws (pause)
Claws up
Paws behind your back
I'll tail (trail) you
Paw-lese
Claw-ful
Paw-ful
Etc...

I have 1 cat pun. I mean, I have more but I took them from the show so... supurrise

Getting awesome good can’t wait for more

Please write more

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for. Please and thank you.

No offense, but the quality of this chapter seems lower compared to previous ones. Grammatical, capitalization, and punctuation errors become more and more common as the chapter progresses. My suggestion would be to revise the chapter and post it when some of the stress you talked about at the start has been lifted.