| Reviews for HP- The Aryan Legacy |
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MiszczuS chapter 3 . 5/16 where is update? |
lunadream13 chapter 1 . 4/21 thank you for the update on the story status. hope to read more of your works. |
RikudoNaruto1 chapter 2 . 4/21 I'm very much so looking forward to read the next chapter :D |
Q.Elwyn.D chapter 1 . 4/21 You know, I don't mind stories where Harry and Hermione aren't together, despite being a pretty die-hard shipper. On the other hand, the moronic 'they love each other like siblings' thing? That is 100% a cop-out. A bad cop-out. The only time it came up was when Harry was faced with a jealous, angry, instant-death-sword wielding traitor whom he had to placate in order to not get stabbed and killed. Whereas on the other side, Ron treats Hermione exactly the same way he treats Ginny, and the two of them bicker like most siblings do. Clearly it's the best-friends who rely on and trust each other and don't fight over petty things who are sibling-like, rather than the ones get into petty arguments over anything and everything at the drop of a hat, but still support each other when it's needed, only to go back to fighting again immediately afterwards. Let alone the fact neither Harry nor Hermione ever had siblings to know what loving someone like a sibling actually means. Bad cop-out is bad. ~Elwyn, Q.E.D |
Raymondjay41 chapter 2 . 4/14 This could be great, but it needs continued to do that. So far it’s very interesting |
lunadream13 chapter 3 . 4/9 please continue this story. it's amazing so far. |
TotalLost chapter 3 . 4/8 It's great! Please continue. |
Kyron120867 chapter 1 . 4/7 this looks to be a well thought out plan and an interesting premise. Please continue to update the story. |
jeet granger chapter 3 . 4/7 I do quite like the story and would love for you to continue. |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7 This is interesting please keep going with it |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/7 The premise looks good so far and the summary shows your plot is unique in some ways. I'm only bothered by the use of the term "Aryan", which has been historically misappropriated by some white supremacist groups and movements. It is very distracting when reading through as the term literally throws me out of immersing myself during reading. Not trolling, just trying to give you feedback. |
Guest chapter 2 . 6/25/2018 I read this story 2 or 3 times, I love the plot and I'd like to read more of this, please. |
angel897 chapter 2 . 4/25/2018 love it and love to read more so please write more and update again soon |
Lord Evan Osiris III chapter 2 . 4/15/2018 I'm loving the story. Great start and amazing background in the first chapter. Excellent details describing the changes and the making of the wands. Please continue. Can't wait for the next chapter |
DaughterOfHemera chapter 2 . 6/30/2017 I LOVE THIS! Please continue writing |