Aaaah! You evil writer! Now I'm officially having nightmares.
This promised to be so cute... and ended being so bittersweet... why you do this to me, why?
Anyway, if a bit rushed, indeed, I cannot think of a better ending, knowing that the old Miraak will be always there, putting on a fight to resurfacing again. Creepy bastard.

This is one of the most interesting fanfics I've read in a while. I love the concept of amnesiac Miraak and I also love his bookish and somehow goofy personality. Moreover, I like your Dragonborn and the way you describe Teldryn. Thank you for writing this very intriguing story!

This is the best fanfic I've read in a looong time. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

Wooooo! I'm afraid he got friendzoned at this point. As Teldryn pointed out: she never got attracted to anyone before and the life of a Dragonborn is full of responsabilities (even she thought that, while she would feel sad, it will be in the best of Skyrim interest to both part ways and do good separated).
A shame she feels compelled to do good instead of having a life of her own, but still there's the point, even if she would want something with him, that he was who he was and she never spoke with him about that before. About that she hired him in the first place just to make sure he wouln't snap to his previous self. Their friendship, less a relationship, is based in half truths. Perhaps is what you intended to show the reader here: while he's a different man, she's not a different woman and she should tell him who he was, what he did and how he changed.
But this in under "Adventure" category, so maybe I'm munching over this a tad too much, but I am really fearing the drama here.
Anyway, thank you for continuing this, is simply amazing!

Wow. This is a wonderful story! I really enjoy this story about Miraak, as it's a rather new idea. I haven't seen any other stories involving an amnesiac Miraak before, so this story has very much captured my attention. It's a new and unique concept and I like that. :) I like that a lot.

I'm really curious to see how you end this story. And I'm also very curious to see if Miraak and the Dragonborn will end up together romantically. I'm not sure if that's what you have in mind though. To me, it seems like Miraak may be crushing on the DB a bit. It also seems like your DB is likely to friendzone Miraak. If they ever were to end up together, it seems like it would be a long time before that happened, as the Dragonborn doesn't seem attracted to Miraak in any way. I'm probably looking into this too much honestly. Sorry, I'm just a big fan of Miraak being romantically paired with the DB. It's one of my favorite ships.

Anyway, I look very forward to reading the next update. I'm eager to see what happens next. Don't rush yourself though, as rushing to update never ends well. You've done an excellent job on this story! I think it's lovely. I'm honestly going to be a bit sad once it's completed and over. But I'll also just be happy to know it has an ending. I hate it when stories are forever left without an ending. It's such a disappointment. I sincerely hope you never leave this story as uncompleted, as that would be a real shame. I truly do want to see how this story will end.

Thank you so very much for taking the time to create this story! It's such an interesting read. :)

Hiya! I really like your fic, the idea it developes and the turn of events this is taking. Though I could use some more reading of dialogue interaction between them (wink, wink), the story is still a good one.
Aaaaand... I can just feel the spoiler: Miraak acts like embarrased around her because he fancies her :P Luv that.
I hope you are recovering from your sickness, thank you for write this ;)

For some reason, I never got an alert this was updated. -_- Oh well. I am really enjoying this! Great chapter! I'm excited to see what will happen next chapter. I keep wondering if he's going to remember or not, and if that'll cause them to fight! I hope not, though. I love Miraak as a good guy. Hope you get to feeling better soon and also update soon! :)

Hello, I just found this story and so far I'm in love with it! It's got a few spelling issues but honestly they're easily overlooked.

Sometimes I wish I got to see some of the interactions between the Last and First rather than just read that they happened, but so far this is a good story, I'm a sucker for anything involving Miraak and the Player DB, and i'm eager to see where this is going.

The story isn't going to end so soon, is it?

I very like your Stories about the First und the Last Dovahkiin and i hope that you make more stories. This is a very interesting Theme and I hope you make your other Story "Elder Scrolls Oneshots" to a end.

PS: Sorry, my english is very bad.

Oh my! The plot thickens! Hope to read more of this story, I really, really like it! Wonder what she will do next and if their friendship would develop into something more, mainly because I do ship them together XD.
Still great story! Keep the good work!

Love where you are going with this

Hello, there. I enjoyed this chapter. I love how you portray Miraak, as If he isn't inherently evil, but has a decent nature. Like, maybe his circumstances are what made him that way in the beginning. I hope that if he regains his memories, he will not go completely malevolent. I am beginning to think the two dragonborn are starting to develop feelings for each other. ;)

I think my only criticism is that this chapter was purely "told" without any "show". Like, most of the conversations would have been better written out. That's the only advice I have. :)

I look forward to what happens next.

I half expected a dragon to attack them on the way to the ruins, forcing her to show that she's dragonborn. I'm enjoying this a lot, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next chapter. Good job! ;) I am hoping that if Miraak regains his memories, he'll have a new perspective on the situation, and maybe won't be such a bad guy. Well, it remains to be seen.

This is well-written, and I hope to see more soon. I'm very intrigued by the concept of him having lost his memory. Nice work.