please make more chapters

Not Gonna complete this Hilarity Huh... OUCH... If by Blue balls you meant dipping your funny parts into a cauldron of molten tungsten, Then yeah, COCK. BLOCKED!

noice.

Plz make more

this is a fun fic, by the way things are going Jaune is going to give is daughter a bunch of brothers and sister to play with

looking forward to more

You call that bad! Nigga I cried.

So where's the sex scenes? I read this hopeful, and ended reading it with disappointment. Nice one.

Love the story, and it's nice to imagine that Pyrrha will always show up to listen when they visit her tombstone...

honestly out of all women in this story, the best candidate for the threesome is Ruby without question, she is the one who and still loves him the longest and she also visit him the most even out of all girls.

and honestly Jaune is the closest to her out of all of them even though Yang is his wife.

plus History can repeat itself indirectly should Jaune takes Ruby as his own wife, after all Tai had both Raven and Summer... well a history that is a much better version than Tai's of course.

after all Leone needs a cute little imouto herself.

Why did that little story at the bottom remind me of Scott pilgrim vs the world...wait let me think...now I sort of get it seven evil ex's and seven evil sisters okay

mmmmm ok

When is the sex coming? All you're doing is build up and no pay off.

good story but too many grammatical errors

Yup... Definitely want to read the Seven Sisters story... But only if the sisters win. The sisters must win. It has been foretold...

...Well, that's interesting, quite the what if with Glynda. Moving on, I really like the Jaune vs The seven sister short story, it was really amusing.