| Reviews for Untold Story: Yang Dutiful Wife Quest! |
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avjuan37 chapter 6 . 11/21/2019 please make more chapters |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/30/2019 Not Gonna complete this Hilarity Huh... OUCH... If by Blue balls you meant dipping your funny parts into a cauldron of molten tungsten, Then yeah, COCK. BLOCKED! |
IROCK108 chapter 6 . 3/16/2019 noice. |
Guest chapter 6 . 12/9/2018 Plz make more |
LordLoverDuck chapter 6 . 8/16/2018 this is a fun fic, by the way things are going Jaune is going to give is daughter a bunch of brothers and sister to play with looking forward to more |
Minati chapter 4 . 7/15/2018 You call that bad! Nigga I cried. |
Guest chapter 6 . 7/3/2018 So where's the sex scenes? I read this hopeful, and ended reading it with disappointment. Nice one. |
regfurby chapter 4 . 6/29/2018 Love the story, and it's nice to imagine that Pyrrha will always show up to listen when they visit her tombstone... |
Hakkyou no Yami chapter 2 . 1/30/2018 honestly out of all women in this story, the best candidate for the threesome is Ruby without question, she is the one who and still loves him the longest and she also visit him the most even out of all girls. and honestly Jaune is the closest to her out of all of them even though Yang is his wife. plus History can repeat itself indirectly should Jaune takes Ruby as his own wife, after all Tai had both Raven and Summer... well a history that is a much better version than Tai's of course. after all Leone needs a cute little imouto herself. |
comethazel chapter 6 . 11/1/2017 Why did that little story at the bottom remind me of Scott pilgrim vs the world...wait let me think...now I sort of get it seven evil ex's and seven evil sisters okay |
Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 6 . 10/28/2017 mmmmm ok |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/9/2017 When is the sex coming? All you're doing is build up and no pay off. |
Shahzeb chapter 1 . 9/28/2017 good story but too many grammatical errors |
Wincest chapter 6 . 9/1/2017 Yup... Definitely want to read the Seven Sisters story... But only if the sisters win. The sisters must win. It has been foretold... |
Dark Durian chapter 6 . 7/29/2017 ...Well, that's interesting, quite the what if with Glynda. Moving on, I really like the Jaune vs The seven sister short story, it was really amusing. |