Brilliant! I have chills, very well written!

This was depressing af, but also brilliant. The voice of Cassidy and Tulip was spot on. I could really picture the two of them, which made it so depressing. Yet is it masochistic of me to be (not so) secretly happy that they become endgame? Well, maybe not masochistic. More pathetic, really.

I'd highlight my favourite passages, but then I'd just be pasting the whole damn story in my review. I will say that Cassidy's metaphors concerning Tulip are brilliant. And while I don't necessarily want such a dark road for these two, I would still love to see THIS realised somehow on the show. Great work. Hope to see more from you on these two soon. :)

i like so much the last part, please still writting, i love it