I think I need to devour everything you write because it’s so damn good that it keeps me awake when I should be sleeping. I love your writing, but the way you write Jellal and Erza might edge out everything else. Maybe. I’ll probably read a Mira/Laxus story and then be back to them. Or Natsu/Lucy. Or Gray/Juvia. Forget it. I love it all.

There is another “what if they stayed slaves” AU out there that... well, it took a hard left and I wish it had ended like this one and much sooner lol! I’m a gross person and I love the gritty stuff like this. I definitely think in a situation like this Jellal would be flirting with the edge. It’s part of his personality. Anyway TL;DR I really enjoyed this!

I very much enjoyed this. The darkness of your stories is captured perfectly, and this is no different. The ending in particular had me entranced. I look forward to reading more of your work.

I think this is the first time I saw you writing on first person POV? It always turns me off whenever I read the story with the first person POV, but this one is too special to miss! I like the way they shared their last moment and it's just beautifully written as always. Thank you for sharing!

I love every one of your works but especially love the ones betwreen jellal and erza. Can't wait til you post the latest of them!

another little gemstone. So precious, sad, so full of nostalgic feelings for something they cannot have in that horrible world.
Sid Vicious, uh? He'll never be forgotten.

Thanks for posting it! I felt really scared while reading it, not sure why... idk... it was good. I liked the lemon.: )

Loved this, very well done!

That was so beautiful... I loved every word. Thank you for sharing this story.

That was really beautiful. I love the way they shared their last moments.