Waaaaahhhh omgg! Just alone the first chapter has smut and a cliffhanger

I love this story
Can't wait for an update!

I hope Ino comes to her senses and discover what a real TOTAL VITCH SHE IS REAL SOON and she'll help Neji seperate Gaara and Ten like the real Ino would do. If you really love someone, You'll do anything to make your loved ones happy, even if it's the last thing you do. Well that is if she really has a heart xD (Which i hope she has. Please.)

All the character seems OOC, VERY OOC! it's very OOC that I cringe when I read gaara or Neji conversation with Ten. Neji is an Asshole here , Neji is supposed to be cold, elegant but kind and care for his friends in his own way. Gaara is quiet but loves his family and friends, he has changed since he meet naruto . Ino maybe bratty but not that bratty, she loves her friends a lot and care for them thou that maybe make her sound bossy but she'll let things go, for example when Sakura left her for sasuke and became her rival I don't see Ino throwing tantrums, she's sad and probably very mad but she didn't go to ruin her life, right? She still care about her in her own way. Tenten, I don't know a lot about tenten since masashi kishimoto did not show us a lot of Tenten so I can't really judge her character but she seems very strong and I doubt tenten wouldn't fight when she's abused like that and seriously? 'How could I leave without Neji?' It's freaking Mary Sue and Tenten is anything but mary sue she's is strong, tough independent gal. Your antagonist character is very bland and blah~ Ino is the bratty, bossy gal, she's very annoying, so yeah, Neji CAN cheated on her (I'm being sarcastic here). Gaara is the ussual abusive boyfriend with,just like Ino no character. I hope you would develops the character for the next chapter since your story lack character development, I won't say your story is shit, since that's cruel and not polite also I think you can fix the mistake but right now, the story isn't really good. If you think my review is unimportant and has offended you, I'm sorry. Good day.

thank you for the update even though you're so busy. I'm so sad with this chapteri feel so bad for ten like i want to save her from this situation

neji is going to be furioussssss if he finds out. hope he does

Oh gee. That escalated quickly. If Gaara's reaction is that violent, I wonder how Ino's will be.

What will Neji have to say when and if he finds out? They are already obsessed with each other, how much longer will it take before ships wreck?

Thanks!

The plot thickens! I wonder how this will turn out for NejiTen's sake considering they can't keep their hands off each other much less breathe the same air without dashing off into the nearest closet.

Ino is a brat as expected but I wonder if her character will develope, especially if and when she finds out. Same for Temari who's already suspicious of NejiTen's relationship.

Thanks for the speedy update, patiently awaiting the next!

hahahaha gaara. i didnt see that happening!

Thank you for the fast update! I wonder when they will meet again, and more so interested in Ino and Neji's next encounter.

please continue. i was like oh shitttt at the end. wasn't expecting that

That was hot. Definitely hoping you continue this, you can't keep us hanging when you end it off like that! I'll be following the story, loved it!