This story was both sad and amazing to read. I love how you wrote it.

Aww, that was so nice of Twyla to do that for Heath. I truly believe she's one of the most likeable characters I've ever seen. Now Heath won't have to worry about these nightmares anymore! Very good job for sure!

Very intriguing, though I do wonder how Twyla us able to eat bad dreams. Are they like invisible cotton candy or something? Either way, I unfortunately can't sympathize with this, but I have a friend who can; believe me when I say she went through far worse than what Heath. I'm just impressed she's alive.

I dig it! A very unexpected couple, but I can totally see where it works! I love your writing! Keep it up!