Aaqww

Two small typos-horses' tails, not tales, and add a D to please where he says "I trust you are pleaseD with your surprise?"

One comment-(but this is just me, so take it as opinion)-instead of "trademark" kiss, use another word. Trademark to me feels 20th century. Gentle kiss, passionate kiss, something.

Compliments! I love your Hades and Persephone! Love love this idea of him preparing a surprise for her and letting her see winter. Of course she would not have seen snow, much less played in it! How cool is this? Love them together being playful-the dour god of the underworld being playful? He'd never live it down if seen! The addition of her cloak and his helmet was just perfect. Having the tree in there, where they first met was great, and having it try to bloom just because she is near was an amazing touch for the story. I laughed where she was hoping that her mother was not coming down.

I do wish you'd write more in this 'verse. I enjoy finding your cosplay and stories! These two are one of my favorite pairings, and there's not enough written for them!

Well d'awwww...
That was adorable! I'm a sucker for Hades/Persephone so this helped my shipping vibes :P
This pairing is another thing I never knew I wanted- and the entire characterization was cute too!
Overall, I just really liked it XD

It was cute and great.. What a nice gift and yeah I like how Hades acted.. xD

Sweet, romantic, and very erotic though that was left to one's imagination.

Aww it's cute!
Always happy to see more Hades/Persephone fanfiction, although it's odd that I saw you here. What a coincidence_