intresting story, keep going

Its awesome! Please update

I think this a great idea for a story, it really catches ones eye.

Ah so you shows to use indifferent Minato thats gonna be interesting to see if she can actually manage to get a reaction out of him.

Minato is now cold and attends school. Wow this is getting confusing but looking forward to answers. Dont have much to say because its still an intro chapter but will be waiting for the next one. Keep up the good work.

Interesting premise
Love the way minato ain't a mute.

Hey, I like Minato doing Pharos's role, please continue with this.

I liked it. Especially with the added twist of Minato being a smart dude who has taken over Pharos' role... and Minato being a confused wreck in his bed. That was sorta confusing but hey, did raise the suspense so it works.
It was written well and the interaction was good, the idea is unique and the only thing that I found weird was Minato's abrupt 'you are my counterpart' line. I don't know, seems sorta weird he'd say it out of the blue but other than that, good start. Keep it up.

Well this is interesting but I wanted to ask if the Minato that appeared at the male dorms and the Minato that appeared in front of Minako are the same person?

Hmm. I see that Minato is going to take the place of Pharos in this story. Interesting concept.
I wonder how that will tie into Minato waking up in said dorms.
Other than problems with run-on sentences, this chapter was well-written. Far better than some chapters I have written.
Keep this story going!

let's look where this goes shall we.