| Reviews for Foot Traffic |
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ImagineBagginsDragon chapter 5 . 9/21/2017 RAWR YAMIMASH :( ruinin' meh Septiplier |
QueenOfNerds713 chapter 4 . 10/8/2016 Please continue this~ :) |
SinfulWaffles56 chapter 4 . 8/29/2016 I love this story so far! |
Loricorn Myr chapter 4 . 8/28/2016 Well shit, that took a turn for the worse. Damn it, Mark, who was that guy?! Don't worry, though, I have a pile of pillows and blankets to have a crisis in. (I'll probably need more) Thank you for continuing to write, and I'll be sticking around to see what happens next! |
MyPajamasAreCozy chapter 3 . 8/18/2016 The last couple of sentences, I thought it said "sleeping WITH" and not "sleeping IN" and I immediately thought "Hoe, you will and you gonna like it!" Anyways, yeah, this fic is the perverted fuel for my perverted bus. |
MyPajamasAreCozy chapter 1 . 8/18/2016 *screams* THE PERVERTEDNESS IS FUELING MY PERVERTED BUS! HELP MEH BEFO I DRIVE OFF OF PERVERTED CLIFF! |
Intelligente chapter 3 . 7/23/2016 Update Plawz! Plez! Itz so gud! (No, seriously tho, update please c: ) |
ToManyShips69 chapter 3 . 7/19/2016 I love this story please update soon |
Kyle V. Stevens chapter 3 . 7/11/2016 i like this a lot and i would really love to see more. It's really dark, but i feel like it hits on some real issues and topics. Some little spelling mistakes here and there but over all this is amazing. i really hope to see more soon. (or whenever you can get around to it) |
blackfallstar9 chapter 3 . 7/10/2016 This story is amazing! You need to continue it. First of all, while I really don't like a depressed Jack, it fits perfectly in this situation. It would be extremely hard not to be like that. It is nice to know that he still has his wit, though, as shown the first time they talked. I feel so bad for Jack, though. He does have a crappy life. I'm really hoping that it's gonna get better now that he met Mark. Also, in later chapters I would like to know what Mark does to get that money. YouTube? If he does, then it'd be awesome if he got Jack into it, too and then everybody loved him so he earned money. Then they could be YouTube charity workers together. In any case, whatever you do, I just want more of this story. Please continue. |
toxicokatu chapter 3 . 7/2/2016 that story was amazing, i loved it. plz if u have the time continue updating. |