Hello, Herms!
A WolfStar! YAY! This was a nice read... the initial parts seemed slightly similar to Renesmee from the Twilight, though it might just have been a coincidence. Remus' mild cussing (though damn is hardly considered that) was slightly OoC, but it didn't matter that much. The plot on how Sirius got bit was interesting, as was the part where he realises what Remus has been feeling all those years long. Though I think you could have added some words for description of scenes to give a mental image, especially considering that you have not exploited the word count. I think the plot has got a potential if you work more on it, perhaps reverse the times slightly, and make an MC on it.
-Ari (B2, Falcons)

I like it!