Leave it as is and run with it, there are fun things you can do to with it from here

Are you gonna write more? I almost wanna see Sanji flirt with Kira and see Ace get jealous

I think it would be interesting to hear something from Ace's point of view. Does he like her? why did he agree to help her? Is it daddy issues, or is she just pretty?

Just found and read this story. I adore Kira! Adore Kira & Ace. Please do write in Ace's POV :D

I think it would be fine for an ace chapter, just as long as theres good content. E.i. not just him thinking. You don't seem like a bad writer, so I think you could do it. Nothing really sticks out besides the story seems to removing pretty quickly, but I can understand wanting to get to the good bits.

Not sure, some times switching point of views suddenly can confuse me. Love your story it has some grammar issues, but not much. Hope to read more from you soon.

Omg please update this it looks so good! Please UPDATE SOON!

100% love it!
I'd like a more thorough description of your OC (I really like her, so I want an image in my head)
This fanfic has so much potential. I've never read any story like this (some were similar, but not what I was looking for) I've literally been looking for storylines like this!
I can't wait for her journey to really kick off. I'm also looking forward to seeing her fight :)
I hope this fanfic goes far
I also hope that Ace doesn't die (a little divergence from the canon is good)
Looking forward to future chapters
Please update soon ;)