You’re welcome, my friend. You wrote a good story and I’m very interested to find out how it ends.

I love the mention of Emmett. He was one of the good ones. What happened to him and his wife was incredibly tragic.

I like that bit of detail with Maggie feeling some remorse over hitting her son though she ultimately puts the blame on Kurt. It slightly humanizes her without reducing her monstrous qualities.

Rebecca and Burton make a great team. The two of them taking on the Neo-Nazis was more satisfying than Burton fighting them on his own.

The Brotherhood’s retaliation was brutal and definitely hits home for Proctor and Rebecca. All-our war is more assured than ever.

In my opinion, I think you should split the finale up into two chapters. Better to have the climax and the ending spread out than bunched together.

The war has begun.

I like what you did having Proctor being haunted by Alison’s mother like he was by Rebecca in the original fourth season.

To quote Avengers: Infinity War, we’re in the endgame now.

I thought the timing of Calvin and Maggie learning about Naomi was perfect because once they know the truth, there is no going back and it’s best to have that happen close to the end. But I hate Maggie for hitting her kid.

Kurt and Alison showing each other their scars and discussing that night is one of my favorite moments in Sins of Another. I also enjoyed the developments that resulted from that. Kurt and Alison now know who their enemies are with absolute clarity.

I love that Kurt dislikes After Earth.

What a delightful gift in these frightening times.

Wow. Calvin and Maggie are a twisted pair. I hope Kurt and Alison get Hank far away from them. The sooner, the better.

Question: Has Mr. Kitty ever been mentioned in a previous chapter? Because I feel like I’m missing something.

This is one hell of a ride! I was also sad when I saw the lack of Banshee fanfiction. I mean, what a wonderful show. I am so glad I found yours though. You have Kurt to the point and his relationship with Alison graduated so effortlessly. I was very curious to see how you'll pull it off and you did so graciously. I am pulling my hair at their "let's just be parents together" they so obviously cannot be just that. They love each other. I just wish the Brotherhood would go poof. I think watching them try to be a family would be angst-filled enough without the Brotherhood in the picture anyway. We all saw how Kurt bringing his daughter to the daycare went... Anyway, I hope you are still working on this story and hope to see a new update

You’re back! I’m glad your home situation has improved.

Hank’s innocence must be protected at all cost. It’s a miracle his parents haven’t tainted him yet with their racism.

Kurt is luck to have Billy and Alison in his corner. Without them, he would be a self-destructive mess.

Nice twist about Alison’s connection to Randall Watts.

We are in one hell of a fight. I’m on the edge of my seat.

Love it please update like the relationship with rebecca and burton

I wish these two would just get back together already.

Things are about to heat up. And the danger this would pose to Naomi never felt more real.

Kurt, Alison, and the kids make a cute family unit.

You got my hopes up at the start of the chapter before things took a nightmarish turn.

Deva working at the Sheriff station. How sweet.

Another memorable Job appearance.

I like the Carrie/Alison reunion. I predict another kick-ass team-up between them in the future.

I'm glad Kurt finally knows about what Alison did. Hopefully, they'll have a conversation about it in the next chapter.

8 chapters or less to go. I'll try to savor each one of them.

So Alison and Maggie finally meet. I'm worried what Maggie may do in light of this complication. It's good that Kurt is finally starting to see her true colors. And I'm glad to hear that, because kids are involved, Kurt and Alison are back on board to destroy the Brotherhood.

Naomi and Hank are an adorable pair.

Your explanation for the layout of Kurt's new home is heartbreaking. I hope the Kurt in your story gives Calvin the same kind of beatdown he was given on the show.

I think you did a wonderful job describing Naomi and her mannerisms. And that name. At first, I didn't recall what Naomi was until you reminded me in the following paragraph. I instantly felt a stab of emotion in my heart.

I love a good Job appearance. You captured his sassy, no-bullshit demeanor.

I find it adorable that Alison is a Marvel fan.

So when you say "a bit like part one of Sins of Another", what do you mean by that?

Welcome back!

Kurt and Alison's daughter sounds adorable. I'm curious about her name since it wasn't mentioned in this chapter.

Billy being there for Kurt without question is the sign of a good friend. I'm glad it is causing Kurt to question what he assumed about him and Alison.

Oh my God. I thought Alison came back because she missed Kurt. Great twist, TFK-fan118. I hope it paves the way for Kurt and Alison to have an actual conversation.

Job as the Sheriff's department's tech expert. LOL.

I've noticed a few errors in the chapter. I can't recall them at the moment. But you can find them if you look through the chapter.

I applaud you for how you swiftly dealt with Declan and his band of sadistic misfits. I never thought he was an interesting villain. He was nothing more than a weird detour for S4.

I figured that you were positioning the Brotherhood as the Big Bad of your story with the focus on Kurt and the look into his past and Alison's, specifically how their lives were affected by that kind of hatred. I love this idea. It's how it should have been in S4. And I love that you have chosen to keep Billy around unlike the show. It was another great idea on your part to make him and Kurt friends.