| Reviews for Goddess of the Moon, and Her Champions |
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ChaoticInscriber chapter 8 . 6/1 Sadly, a Lot of those Authorities sound like Axel, and none as much so Roxas. Lots of fire, death, terror, all that. If they could choose, I wonder if Axel would /want/ to be able to set himself on fire or "eat" other people's attacks in his own element or not? The fiery chariot would be very useful if he can bring the other two along with him and it's actually faster than they are when running. Or even if it was only on par with them, since it wouldn't be as exhausting as running full tilt. Maybe he'd appreciate claiming 'I Stand Alone', if only so the other two will actually listen to him once in a while when he tries to drop back to cover their retreat. It'd be fairly useless otherwise unless they already know about it and listen, though, since they are so adamant about sticking together. ...That one might be a useful ace in the hole for Xion, actually, just in case any of these assholes manage to get her away from her boys long enough to count for it's activation. It's always nice to have what is effectively a way to become a living nuke in your pocket in case of emergencies, especially given the "hunt" at hand. Hell, the boys would probably insist she take that one if the option to do so existed and they knew about it. Arrows suits Roxas, since he really needs more Range options to balance his combat style and diversify some. Would Speed suit him or Axel better, either to balance their current skillsets or to "resonate" better and thus fall to one or the other if they get no say in the matter? Would Body of Fire make it easier for Roxas to tank one of Axel's stronger attacks, so they don't have to worry about him being in the line of fire, literally? Making Axel even more Flaming is so much his element, though... Do any of them like dogs? Would the pair of doggie-partner Authorities play well together and mesh into a larger pack, or would they be territorial against each other? If they behave, having more help to play guard-dogs would be appreciated I suppose, though they are a mite conspicuous. I can see Axel having appreciation for the ability to scare the shit out of people (IF he can turn it off) and of the three he'd definitely be the one to appreciate an option to default-heart-shot-one-hit-kill things. Assassin experience, and all. Like I said, I can easily see Axel with many of these, but Roxas is a lot harder. |
ptl chapter 1 . 3/10/2019 I just finished watching a complete KH3 gameplay and cried when Xion returned. Also, while it could be better, the game was amazing. So, if you could continue this story, I would be grateful. By the way, KH level powers are Final Fantasy and while Campione also has conceptual level OP bullshit, KH/FF characters have the potential to become Godslayers of their own right with pure strength, magic and skill, some of them are even reality warpers! How is Xion a moon goddess? Was it due to Kingdom Hearts or some other thing tied with concepts? And why are the gods after her? Nearly impossible to reason to a deity when it's fixed on something. Can she access her Authorities and give a power boost to herself, Roxas and Axel? And that crossed Keyblade, was that a x-Blade or a copy of it? |
Sonicdude8 chapter 7 . 11/4/2016 Interesting story so far, looking forward to the end of this battle. |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/20/2016 Axel have authorities based on fire and the sun like if he kill Horus he should control a solar beam |
Guest chapter 8 . 10/20/2016 Roxas and Axel should have three because guys like godou have multiple authorities from the first god so in order to compete with them they need at least three Roxas: gods speed, swallow light and dog Axel: gae bulg, I stand alone and body of fire |
Wolfy wanna bite chapter 8 . 10/19/2016 Axel- Chariot of the sun, Three hours, I stand alone Roxas- Swallow light, Dog, God's speed. |
shadowace2400 chapter 8 . 10/19/2016 I hope that the keyblades aren't underplayed. I figure they will likely play a significant part in helping slay at least the one Roxas kills. Bullshit conceptual weapons at their finest. I also like the thought of Roxas getting a puppy. AKA Pan's divine beast summoned as a puppy. |
piddle chapter 7 . 10/15/2016 good chapter |
DPSS chapter 7 . 10/15/2016 Question. While you seem to have extensive knowledge of KH magic, you haven't had Roxas use any any of the light abilities he showed on either of the fights against him or even as a limit break in days. Why is that? |
tsun chapter 7 . 10/15/2016 0_0 Another one... Well this is a riot. I hope they killed them all and attained their authorities. |
reven228 chapter 7 . 10/14/2016 Man, I just got alerted to this story a week ago and already I'm getting so many updates to this story. Great job thus far especially with this chapter, I especially loved that Gae Bolg is similar to its fate/stay night counterpart. Great chapter, keep goin and stay golden |
shadowace2400 chapter 7 . 10/14/2016 I'm gonna find it hilarious when pandora is confused by gaining 2 sons come to her at once, but super overly joyful by the fact that she has 2 new sons to fuss over who care about each other so much. |
tsun chapter 6 . 10/13/2016 Maid liliana. With the 3 clueless, they need someone whose in thr know that won't trick them (erika) and can hEller them in providing information. Of not liliana, Alice. I'm not a fan of OC. If the OC is well established, then I'm fine but if not, then stick with the named characters. Alice doesn't play much role later on but liliana is a center part of godou's harem. So Alice is preferable but I like liliana more. Will the 3 become campi? Or will it only be Axel and roxas? |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/12/2016 Even if it's not love, I don't see Axel being the king forcing her to do the dirty work. Axel knows what that's like from his time in the organization and probably wouldn't want to put anyone else through that unless they were ok with it. Also, Roxas/Xion please! |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/12/2016 If your going to have a knight first have Axel and roxas became a campione first before one appears |