Fearless chapter!

Well her joining to soon was a let down for me tbh, she didn't go through any bullshit at all like the rest of the crew

I read the chapter as you PMed me! This is te first chapter that I can get in a long time.. The previous chapters were utilised confusing.. He confessed twice? the first one was love the second was like?

When did she leave the revolutionary?. OK I officially can't get the previous chapters at all..

And I didn't understand her wedding one bit. Blackbeard came, her grandpa came, then she yelled that he isn't her grandpa..
Which confused me very much..

But this chapter was actually better.. I understood everyone's reasoning, and I liked the drama.. She avoiding him, him kissing her (before knocking her out.. It was pretty awesome..

So.. That's my opinion.. I hope you aren't angry about anything I said..
Thank you for telling me to read the chapter! It was very good!

admiral is higher rank than vice-admiral

Ummm...what?...who are we talking about? As far as i know no one can be born with a devil fruit.., right?... I don't know what am i supposed to notice, either... Is it something that has to do with sabo? Dragon? Lea? Or the mysterious boy? I don't understand anything.. This is confusing... Anyway thank you for the chapter! I really hope i can understand everything in the next chapter!

WHY DID YOU KILL HIM?! you could have let her heal him [without endangering her life!sniffle-grabs another tissue* Come on!, you are the writer! Just write ANYTHING! No one will complain as long as he lives! ... But there is a slight OOCness in sabo.. I mean he was broken when he saw ace in the paper and realised that he was his brother... Also he is supposed to be the thoughtful, careful, and smart big brother, right?...WAIT...Does he know that ace is his brother too? Or did he not realise it since he was so worried about his sister?... *sighs* my head hurts from all this thinking... -i love all the chapters you write but this was so sad!. Good but still sad!.. And now it is more sad than the original story because he has another sister(girlfriend... Still want to make sure when nami asks) who is crying about him... This is so sad! *sniffleenough with sad stuff.. Thank you for the chapter can't wait for the next time she meets the strawhats!

Ok now i am very, VERY sure that RR is Sabo ! -i would choose corazon (Rocinante) because he is adorable! And he is a very good person who also gave law his life (my favourite character)..

Loved the chapter! I really like Lea as a character! I honestly can't wait to read more! I'll be looking forward to an update whenever you get the chance too! :)

love the story so far! I can't wait to read more! Please update as soon as you can!

I am dying to know what lea's past is! XD.. also why didn't the revolutionary people recognise her ?...I am starting to think that her devil fruit has something to do with her appearance) ... meh.. Thinking is hard!.. Waiting is much easier... Thanks for the chapter!

I love the story! Very creative! But there is something wrong with the last chapter... I could hardly find the chapter... There is many symbols, numbers and random words in the middle of the sentences...

I love it. The part with dragon was funny

Mistakes I corrected will be in [brackets.]

"The [Marines] are here!" A [Water 7] civilian yelled to Iceburg.

He was about to tell the group of pirates in the infirmary about the [Marine] soldiers that were parading their way over to the building,

Only it was too late. A loud crash was heard throughout the room. [Smoke rose] from the damaged building, [and] standing there was none other than Vice-Admiral Garp [along with] a lesser know admiral who looked too young to be anything but a foot soldier.

The [Straw Hat's] captain took a step back, as if afraid of the admiral.

Zoro stood up and put his hands on one of his three swords, [but before he could unsheathe it, Luffy spoke up. "Long] time no see." [This shocked] everyone in and outside the building.

Garp laughed, "[You] haven't seen me in years, and that's all I get[?]"

The young female admiral sighed "Garp, why am I here exactly?"

Garp shrugged his shoulders, "[Y]ou didn't have to get off the boat.[That] was your choice."

The young admiral clenched her right fist. "[My choice!?]" She questioned and then punched the Vice-Admiral in the chest."You were the one who dragged me off the boat!"

This was only the first few paragraphs but you should probably get a beta reader. It's nothing too major though, better than most who have grammatical mistakes.

You have a few mistakes in you grammar but nothing too major. Another suggestion is don't switch POVs too many times in a chapter.