Reviews for Secret Fire
IWantABetterWebsite chapter 24 . 7/14
This has been a fun story so far. It took me an embarrassingly long time to realize that Harry will probably be the Dragonborn in this story. I was mostly thrown off by him appearing five years early.

Also, it hasn't happened much, but every time Harry runs low on magicka or gets worried about running out of magicka, I remember how he was absorbing it too fast when he first arrived and wonder why he can't just do that again.
buterflypuss chapter 24 . 7/6
Good chap
abeorth chapter 24 . 7/6
thanks for the chapter
ranma hibiki chapter 24 . 7/5
...*raises finger*...*lowers finger an turns to go smack head against wall*
I like most of the mages at the college. Brelyna is fun if insecure, J'zargo is an adreniline junkie who wants to be the best (an fire! yay!) the teachers are usually pretty helpful..save for Arniel Gane. he gets like 2 scenes then dies an haunts the college as a spectre...

that an Ancano! by the Divines and Daedra alike I just want to shoot him everytime I see him
heck! I DO shoot him everytime I see him! wither with a fireball to the back, an arrow to the head/knee, an ice spear to the arse, or just stabbing him with somethig pointy. the Hinskaal Sahlag Joor (copied from link below) just won't die until he kills the archmage!
makes for good target practice in destruction/one handed/two handed until then..

well, till next chapter! keep up the good work _

. ?thread371
Garnetio Solozari chapter 24 . 7/5
Snowfall, mead halls, venison lean, turn this displaced wizard green!... Ok, I’ll just put this over here... -random street barrel of abandonment of contraband-
Dragon Man 180 chapter 24 . 7/5
Poor Harry, but being the test dummy for Brelyna‘a spells is one of my favorite side quests in the college.
Scarecrow94 chapter 1 . 6/30
Thanks
Scarecrow94 chapter 19 . 6/29
Hahaha
The Shadows Mistress chapter 23 . 6/29
nice chapter look forward to more
abeorth chapter 23 . 6/29
thanks for the chapter
TheDragon2000 chapter 23 . 6/29
The Hogwarts paralells and differences are quite interesting to read about especially since Harry attended both institutions in this story. I look forward to seeing more of the story.
Wienxia chapter 2 . 6/28
Hey, Im really liking your story, one thing though. When you mention "because he didnt die in the Veil now Voldemort was truly immortal forever," if Harry jump at the same time as Sirius did, Harry wont know the wording of the prophecy.
Dragon Man 180 chapter 23 . 6/28
If Harry has to go through the Dawnguard quest line I can just imagine Serana watching him cuss in every language he knows when he hears they have to enter the Soul Cairn.

Nice elaboration on Ogumund’s backstory, great way of fleshing him out!

The little bits of backstory you made to flesh out the College itself were also excellent!
Garnetio Solozari chapter 23 . 6/28
Each chapter is another reminder of how great this story is to read. -grabby hands- Moar!
buterflypuss chapter 23 . 6/28
Good chap
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