Girl, we need a sequel! Your writing is completely amazing and your OC is incredible, keep up with your amazing work!

This was very well written. Your own character was really good and you developed her well even though her past is somewhat confusing.I feel you stayed very true to the characters. All in all this was absolutely great. I couldn’t stop reading!

Can you make another story involving your OC and Sting like them meeting up again? That would, I think be a nice story-even if there was another war- especially for the people who like the sequel stories that just give you that little bit more. Sorry if this was an intrusion. It's fine if you don't want to do it.

I am currently questioning why I have never read any of your other fanfictions before.
I am questioning myself because this is flipping amazing! I loved this, but that cliffhanger ending is *insert whiny voice* so cruuueeeellllll! *pouts*
I am definitely going to go read more of your fanfictions now! 3

AHHHH I NEED A SEQUEL I AM IN LOVE!

Wow, i really liked this fanfiction, one of the best OCxSting i read until now. Contrarily to what some people are saying in the reviews i don't think either Natsu or Sting are OOC (out of character). I think Natsu would most likely go against anyone (even Igneel) if they suggested letting his friends die (plus, Rhith was the one that brought Lucy back, so she's not just someone he barely knows). And Sting... If he likes Rhith as much as he "claimed", i don't doubt he wouldn't care that much about the others lives he would save if he let her die. Despite being nice and caring deeply about his friends, Sting is a but selfish, so it seems quite realistic that he would refuse to let her get hurt to save other people lives, at first.
I would really enjoy it if you brought a second season, although thats highly unlikely to happen. I feel as if that favor/wish the Spirit King would grant Rhith was just unnecessary information, since you didn't use it at all (that quite disappointed me, tbh) and i think that would be a great way to start a second season (also, if that really happened, would be good if you included mature content :P; it was rather disappointing not even mentioning a mature scene with all that sexual tension)
I love your wrinting though, no mistakes at all and i would love so much to read another OCxSting written by you (if you really don't want to write a second season, that is haha).
I just feel like this fanfiction is kinda unfinished and that makes me really sad, because it is so good in so many ways.
Anyways, keep up the good work, this was a brilliant Fanfiction!

Tbh not really liking the oc,but the storyline is nice..missing lucy

also I loved Rhith, such an amazing OC

I hope you know I spent the last few days reading this, my eyes are sore, but in all honesty...BEST FREAKING FAN FICTION EVER!...if only Lucy and Natsu had that talk...

aww I'm so sad that it's over. I wish there was more of a happy ending for Sting and Rhith, but I loved the part about the orbs and the butterfly at the end.

AHHHHH! SO CUTE! I LOVED IT! Fabulous story!

you're absolutely amazing,thank you for writing such an amazing story

;-; ;-; ;-; THAT WAS SO SAD! I love how you put END in there though, very nice. Poor little Natsu though. And when he wanted Lucy was absolutely adorable! And Sting! ;-; I have no words except that when Rhith's orbs surrounded lingered around Sting's face. Too cute! BEAUTIFUL STORY! I LOVE IT!

Love your story and can't wait to see what happens next so I hope you update again soon plz.

i love this story