To be frank, I hate characters like Hali. See most fanfiction authors when they make a OC character,they always be the main protagonist. Hali for example she is believe useless and then becomes better because reasons. I thought when I started reading this she'll be like Morganna (from merlin) and she'll be badass in her own except she becomes a girl version of Hiccup. And worse you ruined Hiccup

Great little story. Now onto a few of your other story's!
Until next time,
Keep up the awesome work!

Good, good story. I like how you modified the movie. Thank you.

this story has been one of the best you have made and there are many of them that are great.

Interesting

Hi. Pretty good job! I applaud you for finishing this so soon! It was pretty good, in terms of writing. There were some grammar errors, along with a few spelling errors, but mostly grammar. (The apostrophes, the apostrophes.)
You had a great plot, and an interesting title. There was some character development.
I think that if you keep writing, you will improve in your style and in skill! Keep it up! Keep writing!

This story is awesome. As always, its amazingly written and idek how you manage to come up with plot lines like this. Lovely to read.

The word was "llits" or "still"
Great work! Couple grammar errors!

It was "em" or "me" as the word.
Great work! Keep it up and please update soon!
Also, you really are on a flipping roll! Keep going!

The word was "ot" or "to" btw.

Awesome chapter and I totally agree with what happened to Kent I hated that guy from the start.

Oh my word, you work freaking FAST! Anyways, some grammar and spelling errors, not too many though.
I don't find any reversed words since chapter 11!
Great work! Keep it up and please update soon!

Didn't find a word, great work! I'm gonna keep going! Just one more currently!

No word, great work, onto the next chapter!

Didn't find a word. Great work!