Hhahahhaa ohhh noooo.

Well, yep, last one. I enjoyed it regardless. Thank you for writing this!

~FFF

Herobrine being a reluctant/sarcastic babysitter kills me. I really like the elements exposition! It looks like you might’ve given up on this fic, seeing how it’s only 3 chapters long. That’s too bad. It really is very well written. Maybe you’ll finish it someday :)

~FFF

Steve: well looks like im gonna be here for 3 weeks, dodging zombie pigmen and blazes and ghasts and
Herobrine: haha no you’re getting kidnapped.

Honestly? Good for him. I like this.

~FFF

This is interesting i hope you come back to it

you should continue!

Great chapter again. There's not much that I can say that I haven't already said about this story so put simply, you're still doing a good job.

It was nice that we got to find out a bit more about that picture.
BTW, I wonder what the title has to do with the story, you'll probably reveal it later on. :]

Also, sorry I took so long to review this, I've been busy lately.

Run Steve, run for your life! XD This is a very well-written story, I love it

XD gracious I like this.

This chapter was nice but some of the dialogue was confusing, sometimes it was hard to tell who was saying what.

Suprisingly good, and well written, however Herobrine is a much nicer than I would have thought, however, this is your interpretation and I don't mean to criticize.

This looks interesting!

This is pretty good, no typos, decent amount of words, and the plot seems interesting.

Looking forward to more. :]