I should have known better than to read a fanfic that hasn't been updated in a long time but I still couldn't resist and got hooked immediately :( This is seriously so good! Don't know if you'll ever see this but your style of writing is really captivating, I love it. Gonna keep this in my bookmarks!

Not many Greed stories I like, but I genuinely enjoy yours. Thanks

it's wonderful when old (and gold) stories like this gets updated, specially twice in a row. love how their interactions are slowly deepening, both burrowing into each others' lives. And them comes the shady villain since life can't be good all the time. looking forward to the next update.

So surprised to see this update! Very happy though

Hey, sorry to bother you but this whole chapter is filled with html words and fonts that can't be read. I hope you'll fix it soon, it's super hard to tell where the sentence starts and when it ends.

I just spent my morning before class rereading all these lovely chapters, I forgot how enticing this story is. As always, you portray Greed in a way that is so natural to his character. I have the indication that you must be in Greed's head, for somehow you know precisely the way Greed would react to any situation. I don't know if you plan on continuing this tale but I'll be around to read it if you do. Keep up the good writing either way. :)

I know this story hasn’t been updated in a while, but I just thought I would still review and say I was enjoying it so far. It throws me off a bit that the smutty parts kind of get abruptly skipped, but I understand why you are doing it this way.

Please update soon! ️

I like this lol. It's almost like Tom and Jerry, ya know? The old cartoon and Beth is Tom and Greed is Jerry lmao. Update when you can.

Wow she is taking him by force loool

This is an awesome story. I hope you update soon. I cant wait to see what else she tries to do. The only thing i can think of is her getting pregnant lmfao thats an invisible handcuff

How to Keep a guy Faithful:
Handcuff him.

I mean, she wasn't WRONG... lol. Good to see this update. A bit upsetting to see how negative her perspective on faithfulness and stuff was, but I guess that leaves room for hee to "see the light" so to speak. Not that Greed would really be the best guy - opium, really man? - but hey, why not? Love this fic, honestly :3

Hello there! I can't tell you honestly how much I've enjoyed your story thus far. I've probably have reread it four or five times now because I'm so intrigued! I can't wait to see what else you write! Keep up the good work.

You've made me fall in love with Greed all over again. Please update soon!

You leave me absolutely speechless! I'm so excited for what's to come, Beth literally is going to have to start following Greed everywhere now. I cannot wait to see what she thinks of the Devil's Nest. Please update soon! I'm practically begging you!

Wow. I knew Beth was skeptical of Greed and his intentions, but I didn't imagine it would be because of misandry. Makes me wonder what led her to be so cynical towards men. I wonder what makes her feel that way. So she'll have to learn accept men, eh? I can't wait to see how that pans out :)

Yay! You updated! I like it. Sorry, I can't put it into words why I like this chapter, I just do.