I'd be down to give some feedback on your story! I have ample free time, lol. Plus it seems like it would be fun! (Mostly cause I already like your writing style.)

Thank you for making this this a female naruto and sasuke TimeTravel love Story.

What a heartbreaking chapter!

Sasuke *-*

Kakashi with Itachi os so weird.
I can't fall for it hahaha But I did understand your point of view.

They are so precious *-*

I love Sasuke so much.
It was amazing. *-*

I think that it makes sense.

Of course there's so many things going on but I agree that the talk between Naruto and Obito and mostly about Kushina was really almost heart melting since he will never have her blessing in person and sweet. And that Sasuke had ever think that he and Naruto could slept without having sex add depth to him revealing his scars.

I hope he takes the cure. Thank you for the chapter

I really do love this story. Hope Itachi doesn't die, that would just suck.

Ooh this chapter was full of ups and downs. I liked the final scene of Sasuke and Naruto, as Sasuke realizes something he already felt, as in so much pain he could see some light, which contrasts quite a bit with how he behaved before when he did not he saw no way out, but now he has Naruto and he allows him to see a different perspective

PS: I would like to read your story, but English is not my native language so maybe it will take time to read.

Great update! I loved the interaction between Itachi and Kakashi as well as Sasuke’s softer side. Keep up the good work!

First I will comment on the Itachi and Kakachi, I was shocked reading, then I saw your note, I reread the above and it was like, hell, if it happened!I never saw it coming, I understand that it is a way to get rid of all the frustration but it was totally unexpected, on the other hand I would like to know what happens to Itachi,which is what he is hiding from Sasuke and because his attitude is from someone defeated. The part of Sasuke and Konan scared me in a certain way, it was as if to fulfill their plan they could destroy the world, it was really a little creepy although I understand what they are based on, The ninja system thrives for all in wars, for the constant chaos even though in quotes they are always fighting to keep the peace, that will never happen because they benefit from it On the other hand, Sasuke being a considerate boyfriend is the best, he knows how to make Naruto forget his problems, extra points to Sasuke for that reason

PS: Thanks for updating! Beware!

Impressionnant surtout la conversation entre Itachi et Kakashi de c'était très profond. J'ai adoré. Et il semblerait que Sasuké et Konan préparent une petite révolution.